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The Promise
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Tears welled in Alices eyes ***** she finished the chorus and the reality of the song hit her.
one of the many
one of the few
to stand back and wait for you
excuse me Mrs. Busy body
could you pencil me in when you can
though we both know that the worst part about it
is I would be free when you wanted me
if you wanted me…if you wanted me
Dash looked up at Shane who appeared to be physically ill. She put her hand on her thigh as Alices haunting voice drifted over the porch.
I am the man on the side
hoping youll make up your mind
I am the one who will swallow his pride
life as the man on the side
life as the man on the side
Alice sits playing away on her bed, but thinks back to breakfast that morning. Images of Shane holding the ***** Willow as Bette spit out her White Chocolate Mocha across the table…
I fell in love with a dream that I built of you
playing the part of the queen
taking my own advice, Im giving up tonight
good luck to you and the king
Dash couldnt help but feel sorry for Shane. All she ever did was talk about Alice since theyd started hanging out with each other and here ths girl thought she didnt care at all.
Dash: My god…Alice thinks Shane is still with Cheri…or does she think shes with Bette?
She moved in close and wrapped an arm around Shane.
excuse me Mrs. Busy body could you pencil me in
thought we both know that the worst part about it
is I would be free when you wanted me
if you wanted me
if you wanted me
Alice starts to get into the song and strums harder. She looks at her doorway remmebering standing there a few days before as Shane straddle Bette on the bed…HER bed, and the whole time she was topless and wrestling with her.
I am the man on the side
hoping youll make up your mind
I am the one who will swallow his pride
life as the man
you know living life as the man on the side
Shane buried her head with her knees as the rest of the song played out. Finally the line went dead with a single ::CLICK::
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos