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The Promise
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The two hunched over their plates and ate with out talking…or breathing. They occasionally tossed food to the dog, who ate every morsel offered. Shane sat back and belched loudly while rubbing her swollen belly. She covered her mouth and Dash laughed.
Dash: I think I would have cared back when you started eating with your hands.
Shane: Im not one for pleasantries huh?
Dash shook her head and threw a piece of chicken in the air for the dog.
Shane: Alright, let me show you around and then Ill walk the dog.
Dash: Nah, lets just let him out now.
Shane and Dash sat on the porch drinking wine and smoking as Achilles finally did his business on Bette and Tinas front lawn.
Dash: Your neighbors are gonna be pissed.
Shane smiled.
Shane: Yeah Bettes gonna kill you.
Dash: Bette lives next door?!?!
Shane nodded and Dash shook her head.
Dash: Why dont you two just get married already.
Shane: Dont even go there…Im starting to think Alice thinks…
Shane stopped and looked at her vibrating phone. She checked the time and gave a weary smile to herself.
Dash: Is it her?
Shane: Yeah we have a phone date every night.
Shane flipped open the mobile phone and held it cautiously against her head. She became a little confused when all she heard was silence.
Shane: I…I miss you.
Shane surprised herself with the honesty she delivered and covered her head with her hand. Dash snickered loudly. Shane looked at her and she mouthed Sorry before going back to her glass of wine. Shane could hear Alice breathing on the other end, and fear that she was crying.
Shane: Im ***** this up arent I?
Dash and Shane sat on the porch and a guitar riff blared out of the phone. Shane held it away from her. Dash took the phone and put it on speaker phone before sitting it on the steps. They sat listening as the music screamed emotionally from the phone and into the warm night air.
Shane: Shes really good huh?…Ive never heard her before…I wish I could play like that….
Dash rolled her eyes and crossed her arms.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos