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The Promise
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Shane: Shes playing from the heart man…I could never do that
The rift changed over into a melody and Shane was taken by surprise by what she heard next.
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Alice entered her apartment and threw her laptop on her desk. She flopped down on her couch and put her feet up on the coffee table. She sat back rubbing her eyes. She tried to push the mornings breakfast out of her head when her stomach began to growl.
Alice: *****…I skipped dinner.
Alice spent her evening at a Vaginal Salon interviewing the workers and customers about the different dye jobs and hair cuts they received. She got up and walked to the kitchen and opened the fridge. She smiled as she thought of having hot steamy ***** against the door.
Alice: Jesus AL…youve been with her six days and already youre a ***** addict…isnt it enough that you had to look at ***** all day, why make it worse?
She looked into the fridge that was full to the brim with food.
Alice: Everything looks like *****.
She opened the freezer to see the two remaining cartons of Shanes pistachio ice-cream and couldnt help but smile. She took out the open carton and walked over to the counter where she picked up a spoon. Alice sat the box on the counter and leaned over it with her spoon waiting in the air.
Alice: *****, I cant believe Im really about to ***** do this.
She plunged the spoon in and held the mound of frozen delight in front of her face.
Alice: Here goes…
She stood starring at the spoon and finally threw it in the sink. She tossed the carton back in the icebox.
Alice: I love myself too much to even go there.
~LENNY + MAN ON THE SIDE~ Start playing them here.
She turned off the kitchen light and walked back into her bedroom. Alice opened her closet to hang her sweater and found her dirty clothes had been washed and hung up in color order. She shook her head and put her blue sweater in the middle of the yellows while laughing to herself. She turned to close the door but something caught her attention from the corner of her eye. A piece of paper was sticking out of the guitar case on the top shelf. She pulled off the note and read
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos