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The Promise
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Alice: *****..I have to call her…
A promise is a promise.. Rang through her head.
Alice: She said you could just call and say goodnight if you were pissed…If I call shes just gonna show up at like two wanting to ***** like always.
She picked up her cell phone and started to dial, but hung up. Alice ran her hands through her hair.
Alice: She doesnt want to hear from me…shes probably wrapped in Bettes arms right now…Thats probably her mystery caller….running to Bette when Tinas sleeping…
Alice became angry and picked up the phone. She dialed Shanes number and waited for her to answer. She could hear breathing on the other end, but didnt know what to say. She suddenly froze .
Alice: *****..say something…tell her what a ***** she is!
Shane: I…I miss you…
The raspy voice broke the silence on the phone. Alice almost gave in, until she heard a snicker in the background.
Alice: This is all a ***** joke to them isnt it?
Shane: Im ***** this up arent I?
Alice: I have to tell her I know…I need to blow up their spots…how can I tell her….I wish…
Alice picked up the guitar and started to play the song her father taught her. She played at first with hesitation, and then with passion which flowed into anger. The song that she learned to hate as a child was now telling her innermost thoughts. She tapped the phone turning it to speaker phone, and started to play another song.
Six numbers and one more to dial
before I m before you
and Id try to call,
been busy all night
gave up waiting at daylight
excuse me Mrs. Busy body
could you pencil me in when you can
though we both know that the worst part about it
is I would be free when you wanted me
if you wanted me
Shane rested her chin against her fist and placed her elbow on her knee. Her eyes became icy as she heard the pain in Alices voice
I am the man on the side
hoping youll make up your mind
I am the one who will swallow his pride
living life as the man on the side
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos