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The Promise
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Bette shook her head and jogged into the kitchen to see Tina drinking a glass of water while bracing herself against the counter. She ran over and grabbed her braced arm and yanked her towards the living room. Tina dropped her glass sending shards in every direction, when Bette made the aggressive move.
My guilty heart behaves so foolishly
This treason from within
That reasons with my sin
Won’t be happy til’ it sees the death of me
Tina: What the ***** are you…
Bette: Making you understand!
Bette thrust Tina in front of the patio window and pointed over the fence at Shane who stood in her backyard. She stood in a lunged position, her pale legs taunt and muscular as her white boxers rode up. The perfectly carved abs escaped the bottom of her black wife beater as she moved. Her lean arms were extended from her chiseled shoulders.
Bette: This is what Ive been so busy with lately…..look at her…look where she is now…
Tina gasped at the sight of Shane moving gracefully to a dance without a rhythm or a beat.
Tina: When did she…how?
Bette: Theres so much about her I wish you knew, but she wont extend herself past me…shes given me a glimpse …and Ive found myself addicted…almost obsessed with seeing her open up.
Bette wrapped her arms around Tina from behind and kissed her on the neck.
Bette: Dont tell her I showed you….shed kill me..
Tina: Never.
Tinas eyes watered as she watched the lost woman trying to find her way.
Tina: I feel so in the dark.
Bette looked down at Tina when she heard her brazen statement.
Bette: How so?
Tina: She used to come to me….uhm…and then… how did you and I move apart and she became your….your soul mate?
Bette: Were not soul mates… were the same soul.
Bette felt Tina tremble. She spun her around instantly and grabbed the sides of her face to bring them close.
Bette: I keep saying things wrong…they sound like the worse because…its the way they pop into my head and I blurt them out…I dont seem to have discretion anymore…this honesty thing is hard when you dont have your thoughts together…
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I’ll wait as long as I have to and will love reading whatever you write so take as long as you want…. just not too long or I might die of oxygen deprivation from wiating with baited breath! ha ha Thanx for another amazing chapter!! :)
That was beautiful. I could actually imagine Shane really being like that.
The whole thing was amazing. Beautiful. thanks
That was amazing as always..I guess I will b patient but I love them all to be happy but I know that woulmake for a boring story, I am glad Bette let Tina in a little.. Plese go on..Thanks for taking the time you do..
I have always loved that song by Lauryn Hill, what a great song to have with this chapter. How did you know that I was stalking you?? Yay, I’ve always wanted a stalker! (ok not really, but still if it’s you it’s cool) All right All right I’m going to write! I have more song challenges if you care to hear them.
What can I say. How about this? How about “Genius” love this story.
wow…..this gets better everytime!!! how do you do it? Hope shane can find her way back to alice soon! Post soon please
sorry i havent commmented in a few days..life gets busy.. but i have been here reading every word.. i love your story and love your style.. keep up the good work.. my daily addiction needs to be filled… 5 stars gal
Beautiful chapter and I love Lauryn Hill’songs. Love dialogue between Bette and Tina. Hope Shane’ll be happy with Alice… soon
This is amazing and beautiful, love it. Please post soon, thank you!