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The Promise
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Jenny: Im gonna go get dressed since Im already up.
Jenny walked over and kissed Marina on the back.
Jenny: I had a strange dream about a dog…I could have sworn I heard a dog last night.
Marina: Hmm?…Shane brought someone home I believe.
Jenny: You were up? Did you see who it was?…She said she never bring them home…
Marina: No..I can just tell..and I thought I heard talking in the house last night.
Jenny: Mmm…Im gonna take a quick shower and join you for the sunrise.
Jenny scurried off and took a shower, slamming the door behind her causing Marina to jump and shake her head. Marina turned back to the yard and the mystery person Shane brought home with her to see that it was actually Shane. Her hands flowed through the air like water. She could see her inhaling and pushing out everything as she exhaled. She pushed out all the internal stress she kept in, while bringing in a new life force.
Marina was so lost in everything Shane, that she didnt hear Jenny return from the shower. Jenny wrapped her arms around Marina as she held two glasses of orange juice. She climbed onto her toes and kissed Marina on the neck. Marina took one of the glasses, and held her free hand over Jennys.
Jenny: I left you some hot water.
Marina purred before tapping a salute with their glasses. They both said LChaim and took a sip.
Jenny: Did I miss it?
Marina: No shes still going…
Jenny: She?
Jenny peeked around Marinas side to see Shanes body parting the air before her.
Jenny: Woah…I didnt know she knew Tai Chi…shes so…
Marina: Beautiful.
They both sat in silence watching Shane, until it was time to leave for work.
Marina: When no ones looking, shes like a living work of art.
Jenny nodded as she laced up her boots on the couch.
Jenny: I wonder why shes up so early…or late.
Marina: I think shes lost…but I hope she will find her way.
The two crept out the front door and Jenny slammed the door shut. Marina shook her head and took her hand as they walked off to the Planet.
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I’ll wait as long as I have to and will love reading whatever you write so take as long as you want…. just not too long or I might die of oxygen deprivation from wiating with baited breath! ha ha Thanx for another amazing chapter!! :)
That was beautiful. I could actually imagine Shane really being like that.
The whole thing was amazing. Beautiful. thanks
That was amazing as always..I guess I will b patient but I love them all to be happy but I know that woulmake for a boring story, I am glad Bette let Tina in a little.. Plese go on..Thanks for taking the time you do..
I have always loved that song by Lauryn Hill, what a great song to have with this chapter. How did you know that I was stalking you?? Yay, I’ve always wanted a stalker! (ok not really, but still if it’s you it’s cool) All right All right I’m going to write! I have more song challenges if you care to hear them.
What can I say. How about this? How about “Genius” love this story.
wow…..this gets better everytime!!! how do you do it? Hope shane can find her way back to alice soon! Post soon please
sorry i havent commmented in a few days..life gets busy.. but i have been here reading every word.. i love your story and love your style.. keep up the good work.. my daily addiction needs to be filled… 5 stars gal
Beautiful chapter and I love Lauryn Hill’songs. Love dialogue between Bette and Tina. Hope Shane’ll be happy with Alice… soon
This is amazing and beautiful, love it. Please post soon, thank you!