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The Promise
Tina: So thats what all the cryptic stuff with Jenny was about?
Dash nodded and kept her eyes on the floor as they walked over to the second photo of Tina asleep on the couch. There were balled up tissues around her and her face was pasty and pale.
::In Sickness…::
Tina laughed and Dash looked at her with a raised eyebrow.
Tina: On our first real date, I got food poisoning and ended up sleeping on Bettes couch with a bucket next to me…which I filled….it was our first official date and sleep over too….I cant believe she took a picture of me while I was sleeping.
Dash: I guess she thought you were still beautiful.
Tina rolled her eyes and laughed.
Tina: Or she thought she could use it later as blackmail.
Dash reached into her pocket and pulled out another rose with a whimper as she stuck herself with another thorn.
Tina: Why didnt you just use gloves?
Dash thought for a second and then shrugged. Tina took the rose and read it out loud.
Tina: Im sorry you got sick on our first date. I was arrogant and picked an exotic place to show off.
Dash: What did you eat?
Tina: Cantonese
Dash: Oh that explains why…
Tina: What?
Dash: Nothing.
Dash gave her a wink and pulled her over to the next picture. Tina looked up to see a photo of her stomach. Her hand was held inside of Bettes and laid below her bellybutton. The light hit both of their rings and sent small beams of light across the photo, as if the life that was growing inside of Tina was sending out a beacon of love. Tina felt the pain of her baron womb and closed her eyes. She looked down at the sign below the picture.
::…and in health::
Dash held the next rose in front of Tinas face to remove her from the temporary daze she was in. She took the rose and read it while chocking on her own words in an effort to keep herself from crying.
Tina: Im sorry you lost the life that was forming inside you
They quickly moved to the next photo of Tina and saw herself lying naked on the floor next to the couch. Luckily her arm was dangling across her chest, but her lower body was twisted so her ***** was showing. Tina blushed and turned to Dash who was looking up at the ceiling and rocking back and forth on her heels.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?