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    The Promise

    Story written on March 1, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52378
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    Chapter 36 – Lavander: Satin and Silk

    Dash leaned through the door and hit the light switch. The light came on along with music that played on the speakers overhead. The song Bette and Shane worked on ~Make Me Whole~ played through the room. Tina looked around to see white and sterling rose petals spread across the floor. The walls were lined with poster size black and white prints that went around the room. She looked up to see Dash blushing and became suspicious.

    Tina: What?

    Dash: Nothing

    Tina: Come one…

    The two walked into the open room and Dash stopped.

    Dash: Oh…before I forget…

    Dash reached into her inside breast pocket and pulled out a rose. Tina looked at her trembling hand and gasped.

    Tina: Why do you have so many cuts on your hands?

    Tina took her hand into her own and looked down to see the girls hands looked like she had been juggling razor blades.

    Dash: Those ribbons didnt just tie themselves

    Tina: How many did you do to get your hands to look like that?

    Dash: Please dont remind me…besides…youll see later.

    Tina took the rose and read the ribbon

    ~Im sorry I never showed you how truly beautiful you are~

    Tina smiled to herself and Dash held out her arm for Tina to take again. They walked up to the first picture. The photo was of Tina asleep in bed on her stomach. She was topless and the sweat glistened off her back. Her long hair was spread out in a fan across the mattress and the bed sheets were draped across her lower body.

    ::Phyrst Time::

    Tina covered her mouth as she looked at the picture. She reminisced on the first time she and Bette ever had *****. She was so nervous she didnt know what to do. In fact she didnt know HOW to have ***** with the woman she was falling in love with. She turned to Dash who was looking down at her shoes.

    Tina: She took a picture of me after the first time we had *****?….Its okay to look.

    Dash: Oh Ive seen them all already…my job was to go to the studio and make sure that…

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    1. Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)

    4. Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!

    5. i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!

    6. youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

    8. Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks

    13. I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~

    14. I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?

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