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The Promise
~Im sorry I didnt get your dream car on our wedding day~
Tinas jaw dropped and Jenny smiled. She looked up at James who winked back at her in the mirror. The three traveled in silence until they pulled through an area that seemed familiar. By the time she recognized where they were, they were at their destination.
James stopped the car and opened the door for Tina and Jenny. When she stood up, she saw that they were standing outside of Bettes old studio. The place where theyd first met. The beginning.
Tina allowed a small grin to spread on her face as she took the arm that Jenny offered. They walked through the front doors to see a banner hanging the read The Bette Porter Studio Jenny released Tinas arm and took a step back.
Tina: Is Bette in the back?
Jenny: No…she wont be joining you today…but another guide will be along shortly.
Tina watched as Jenny walked out the door and punched James in the shoulder. She laughed to herself as she turned to see Dash walking down a long corridor on top of a blanket of white rose petals that lifted and wafted in circles around her every step. Tinas face fell when she watched the girl walking towards her in her new DaVinci tuxedo. The tux was pure white and the long jacket came down below her knees. She appeared to be nervous but quickly let a confidence wash over her as her walk turned into a strut as if someone flipped a switch on inside her.
As Dash came toe-to-toe with Tina she stared her in the eyes as if to size her up. Dash held out another letter for Tina which she took while keeping her eyes on the young girl. She finally took her eyes off of Dash to open the letter.
~Tina my love,
By now Shane has brought you to the place where everything began. Theres a new exhibit featured and its a one time only premiere. Please enjoy.
Always Watching
~B~
Tina looked at Dash and she handed her a second card from Shane.
Tina-
Dash will take you through your tour. Relax, shes already seen them before so you can feel comfortable with her. Besides, I dont think youre ready to see me.
~S.A.M~
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?