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The Promise
ps- give the girl a break and youll fall for her like the rest of us have.
Tina: What exhibit are we here to see?
Dash: Uhm…oh…the exhibit is called True Beauty…its by a featured artist….uh…Maam.
Dash offered her arm to Tina and she looked at her reluctantly. She took her arm and let her walk her back through the corridor. Tina looked up and realized the girl stood a good three inches over her even with her heels on. She focused on the floor as they walked down the hall in silence. The sound of their shoes became deafening.
Tina: Uhm…so whats your name again?
Dash: Its uh…Dash …Maam.
Tina chuckled.
Tina: And is that your real name? Not a nick name?
Dash: Oh…well..its short for Dashell…Maam
Tina nodded and looked away.
Tina: So howd you get stuck with the schitzo wife?
Dash smiled and looked down to see a perfect view of Tinas cleavage. She could see she wasnt earing a bra and with certain movements her areolae were visible from her vantage point. Dash licked her lips and tried to think clearly.
Dash: Uh…well we switched things up this morning cause of yesterdays little…the misunderstanding …so we all agreed that we should switch to make you more comfortable…but we sorta didnt tell Bette.
Tina: What do you mean you didnt tell Bette? And by making me comfortable you mean make Shane comfortable since she doesnt like dealing with conflict?
Dash bit down on her bottom lip as she watched Tinas milk and honey skin drift back and forth beneath the satin fabric
Dash: You said it not me.
They reached the end of the hallway and Tina looked up to see Dash quickly look away as beads of sweat escaped the pores on her forehead. She also notice for the first time that she was rather pale and anxious.
Tina: Youre doing fine
Dash: Huh?
Tina: Youre nervous…you get cocky when youre nervous, but its starting to fade.
Dash: Oh…I..uh..sorry Maam
Tina laughed and touched her collarbone with her free hand.
Tina: Calm down you dont have to be so formal, were just going to see a few paintings right?
Dash: uh..actually its photography well be seeing.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?