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The Promise
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Dash looked at her with a look of complete confusion. Shane gave a toothy grin and leaned up to whisper in her ear. Alice shifted beneath the girl as her body was screaming for more of her gentle and barely there touches. Dash leaned back and gave an audible gulp as she swallowed hard from the advice Shane had just given. Alice looked from Shane to Dash. Shane was smiling and nodded at the young girl, silently telling her that she could follow through with her instructions. Alice watched as the girls eyes shifted. She could see that she was trying to study her body and fully contemplate what Shane had told her.
Dash looked at Shane with complete fear in her eyes and climbed off of Alice. Alice let out a sigh, thinking the girl had thrown in the towel. Dash laid on the opposite side of Alice facing Shane and ran her fingertips over Alices thighs. A huge grin spread across Alices face and Dash seemed shocked. She looked at Shane who was nodding and grinning. Alices legs began to part, and Dashs jaw dropped. Shane let out a small chuckle as she watched Dash swimming in the new developments shed discovered.
Dash tapped the inside of Alices thigh and she spread her legs wider, enough for Dash to fully slip her hand in between. She massaged the inner thighs as if questioning Alice for entry. She moved closer towards the thick patch of hair and moist heat that lay beyond. Dash looked down and smiled when she saw the glistening wetness that was seeping from within Alices lips. Alice spread her legs farther and Dash decided to listen to her instincts and take some initiative. She moved her body up and in between Alices legs. Alice blushed when she opened her eyes to see the amateur love maker hovering over her with a look of enthusiasm. Dash was ready to start ***** Alice and looked like a kid in a candy shop….and she literally was.
Alice tried to suppress her inner doubts, but had the feeling that tonight was going to be a night full of sexual tension and one that would end in a lack of release. There was only so much Shane could teach her in one night by whispering in her ear. As if reading her mind. Shane leaned in and whispered into Alices ear.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.