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The Promise
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Shane: I wouldnt let her if I didnt think she was ready to fulfill your every nedd.
Shane pulled away with a wink and whispered into Dashs ear. Dashs face went completely pale as Shane continued to talk. She shook her head No frantically as Shane pulled away. Shane again whispered in her ear and Alice just sat bored and frustrated as she strained to hear the conversation. She watched Dash spread a devilish grin across her face and glare at Shane from the corner of her eye. She seemed to have a new found confidence, but Alice could see the nervousness lurking behind her emerald eyes.
Dash leaned in slowly and kissed Alice. Alice moaned into the kiss as she felt the fragile hips press down firmly into her own. Dash pulled out of the kiss leaving Alice wanting and begging for more. Shane nodded her head at Alice as if to say yeah I taught her that and Alice gave her a steely look. She gasped when she felt Dashs lips brush against her pelvic bone. Dash traced the contours of her hips and pelvic area with her tongue placing gentle kisses every so often in Alices most sensitive areas.
Alice raised her hips and bit down on her bottom lip as she looked over at Shane who was propped up on her elbow. Shane had a look of pride all over her face. Where most parents would revel in their kid making the game winning basket, Shane sat back with a look on her face that said thats my girl while she devoured Alices silken skin. Shane leaned in close to Alice and whispered against her lips.
Shane: Is she better then you thought shed be?
Alice: I guess well only know if she can make me *****….Ahhh
Alices mouth flew open as Dash dove in and captured her ***** in her heated mouth. Shane took the opportunity to enrapture Alices mouth and covered it with her own. Alice moaned and screamed into her mouth as Dash carefully assaulted her ***** with her tongue. She applied the right amount of suction and even grazed Alice with her teeth causing her to whimper into Shanes mouth. Shane went to work on Alices nipples, rolling and pinching them between her fingers as Alice began to grind beneath her. She didnt know if she could take much more, until she felt two fingers slide deep within her, and then she knew she couldnt. She felt her legs shake violently as Dash pulled her mouth away and tapped her tongue ring against Alices *****. Alice could see the colors swarming around her and gave in to the combined sensations coming from the women controlling her body.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.