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The Promise
Shane: Shes not a kid!
Shane barked at Alice causing her to lean back to avoid her wrath. The look in Shane’s eyes was fierce as she appeared ready for a verbal confrontation.
Dana: Im outta here, I cant do this twice in one day.
Dana stood up to leave after saying her goodbyes.
Jenny: Hey Dana, can I catch a ride, I have class.
Jenny quickly followed Dana to avoid a repeat performance of what occurred between Bette and Alice.
Marina: Alice, its not a real Mocha Red-Eye…its hot chocolate with a shot of my Arabian coffee….our darkest roast….so she just tastes a strong coffee with chocolate…
Bette: Sometimes its easier to just give teens what they think they want rather then go trough the arguments.
Tina kissed Bette on the neck and smiled.
Tina: Youre going to do great with those kids baby.
Bette: Thanks Tee…howd I do outside?
Tina thought for a second.
Tina: Hmmm…well, your volume level was perfect for the right amount of public ridicule….Good articulation…Oh, and the use of the classic ear hold was superb.
Shane: Two handed I might add!
Tina nodded and smiled.
Tina: Overall effect Id give it a nine…point five….what do you think Shane?
Shane: Hmm…Id give it a seven point five.
Bette: A seven point five?
Shane: Well…you tripped a little on the sidewalk…thought Id bust out laughing right there….plus, we bumped into the door frame on the way in….so I took points off for lack of style and the rough landing.
Bette sat in mock horror for Shane’s rating.
Bette: Whatever…that still leaves me above an eight average. I can handle that.
Tina: Hey Shane, has Dash said anything about if shes…
Shane: Nah…still hasnt..Im not gonna ask or push it thought…If shes ready to come out, she will if we dont push her….Besides, Im having way too much fun watching Fairbanks squirm.
Bette and Tina laughed between quick kisses.
Tina: Okay, I have to get going. Ill see you three for dinner….tell Dash I said goodbye and were having Thai….Let me know if Van finally takes you up on the invite….oh and Dash better…
Shane: She will…shes going to classes no matter what…but first Im bringing her by Lather to start training….just an hour or so before I drop her off for her morning lessons.
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(21 votes, average: 4.62 out of 5)
SO GREAT. Can hardly wait for my next fix. And Shane go to see THE doctor. I just hope she will not end up with AIDS. Anything else but not this one. Alice really start to regret her action. I don’t feel Shane is ready to give her another chance though, at least not now. Go write my next fix ~wink~
Well done!!!! If this was a rush job you sure wouldn’t know it from the writing. It was funny,emotional, and flowed beautifly. Alice is finally getting to see another side of Shane,Dash and Bette, now she needs to take a good look at herself. Great chapter as always. Thanks , please post soon.
bett done cry : ( danm u shane, oh my god will alice ever get back with shane, and dash, lord help her, she needs to get laid big time
Again, a great chapter. Now, what about Alice ? OK she was wrong but Shane wasn’t all innocent… And Shane needs to go to the doctor.
This where we meet Daisy, Shane going to the Dr, and Dash is scare spitless. Love this.
Hey there, missed your story and so gald there was a chapter for me to read when I came back from work!! I take my pills like Dash and Shane, glad to know I’m not the only one!! Amazing as always and eagerly awaiting the next installment!! =0)
FInally, been waiting for what liked seemed forever, great job as usual.Its as good as drinking a watermelon smirnoff ha ha ha.
POOR ALICE,soon it’ll happen!RIGHT?LOVED THE CHAPTER.PLEASE POST SOON
Wow this chapter is surprise and awesome. This is like everybody will have proplem to themselves, anyway glad Alice there and see what she need to see and now let see what happen next. Post soon, thank you! Great chater!
I see Daisy made a appearance. Good Job with this chapter. Waiting to see where you take this.
I loved this chapter, but you know that I love everything you right. I can’t wait to see how it pans out.
Glad you’re back! Like the fact you included Daisy. Can’t wait until the next installment; you’re full of surprises!