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The Promise
Bette: What does she have in the morning?
Shane: Calc…No, I think she moved up to Stat.
Bette: Stat…as in Statistics?
Shane: Yeah
Tina: Uhm…isnt that like a college level class?
Shane shrugged.
Shane: I wouldnt know, I never went….I just know Van is a slave driver, and the kids can take whatever he throws at them.
Alice looked up from her laptop and watched as Dash emerged from the bathroom, with a frightened look on her face. A young girl with long blonde flowing hair came out right behind her. The young girl looked familiar and stood beside Dash in olive cargo pants and a black t-shirt. She placed a hand on Dash’s shoulder and whispered in her ear. Alice rose slightly from her seat but stopped halfway and continued to watch from her frozen position. The mystery girl rubbed her shoulder and pulled her into an awkward hug. Before she walked off, Dash gave her a forced grin.
Shane couldnt help but notice something was bothering Alice, and turned to see what had her attention. She watched the interaction between the two girls. Tina went to go see what was wrong, but both Shane and Bette told her to wait at the same time.
Shane: No one saw anything okay? Dont make a big deal, just let me talk to her.
Tina nodded. All three looked over at Alice. For the first time Alice and Shane locked eyes with malice. The cold look that Shane gave her made her unintentionally hold her breath. She felt her eyes begin to water, and looked down to resume typing. Tina raised an eyebrow and almost said something, until Bette touched her hand and shook her head No.
Tina: Uhm…then I guess I should leave, like I said I would ten minutes ago.
Tina kissed Bette goodbye again, and headed out the door, leaving the three woman alone. The deafening silence almost became unbearable, until Dash walked up to the table, causing Shane to stop staring at Alice as she typed away.
Shane: Hey…Marina brought you a refill.
Dash shuffled her feet and looked down at the floor…she visibly looked shaken. Shane reached out and grabbed her hand. She slowly looked up but something across the Planet caught her attention. Shane looked out the large windows, to see something she never thought shed see.
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(21 votes, average: 4.62 out of 5)
SO GREAT. Can hardly wait for my next fix. And Shane go to see THE doctor. I just hope she will not end up with AIDS. Anything else but not this one. Alice really start to regret her action. I don’t feel Shane is ready to give her another chance though, at least not now. Go write my next fix ~wink~
Well done!!!! If this was a rush job you sure wouldn’t know it from the writing. It was funny,emotional, and flowed beautifly. Alice is finally getting to see another side of Shane,Dash and Bette, now she needs to take a good look at herself. Great chapter as always. Thanks , please post soon.
bett done cry : ( danm u shane, oh my god will alice ever get back with shane, and dash, lord help her, she needs to get laid big time
Again, a great chapter. Now, what about Alice ? OK she was wrong but Shane wasn’t all innocent… And Shane needs to go to the doctor.
This where we meet Daisy, Shane going to the Dr, and Dash is scare spitless. Love this.
Hey there, missed your story and so gald there was a chapter for me to read when I came back from work!! I take my pills like Dash and Shane, glad to know I’m not the only one!! Amazing as always and eagerly awaiting the next installment!! =0)
FInally, been waiting for what liked seemed forever, great job as usual.Its as good as drinking a watermelon smirnoff ha ha ha.
POOR ALICE,soon it’ll happen!RIGHT?LOVED THE CHAPTER.PLEASE POST SOON
Wow this chapter is surprise and awesome. This is like everybody will have proplem to themselves, anyway glad Alice there and see what she need to see and now let see what happen next. Post soon, thank you! Great chater!
I see Daisy made a appearance. Good Job with this chapter. Waiting to see where you take this.
I loved this chapter, but you know that I love everything you right. I can’t wait to see how it pans out.
Glad you’re back! Like the fact you included Daisy. Can’t wait until the next installment; you’re full of surprises!