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The Promise
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Shane: Oh dear God NO!
Bette: What?
Bette sat down her White Chocolate Mocha and looked out the window, as did Alice. Pacing back and forth outside was an exhausted Van. His hair was an unruly mess that stood in every direction. He was holding a full conversation with himself as he paced back and forth and chewed on his nails nervously.
Bette: *****…How much you want to bet hes considering the ramifications of entering this evil establishment?
Shane: No its more than that…Bette, can you grab him before he makes a scene splashing Holy Water on the front door.
Alice just sat wondering why the ***** the nice guy from the church was standing on the sidewalk in the middle of West Hollywood having a conversation with the Big Guy.
Alice: *****! Its bad enough I had that skeevie dream, and now hes here and the kids here too ugh!
A muffled noise withdrew Alice from her mental tirade and she saw Dash curled up in Shanes lap with her head buried in her chest. Shane rocked her side to side with her chin on top of her head.
Shane: Shhh…its okay…really…youll figure it out eventually…theres nothing wrong with what you did….you just gotta be honest with yourself hun…
Dash nodded against her chest.
Shane: Its perfectly natural to get upset…was that your first time?
Dash mumbled something incoherent into Shanes chest.
Shane: Huh?
Dash snapped her head up.
Dash: Nothing happened okay!…God!…you happy now?…Dash freaked, the chick called my bluff and I didnt follow through…there you proved…
Shane: Hey!
Shane grabbed Dash as she tried to storm off and pulled her in tight. Tears streamed down the young girls face and Shane held her close. She brought her mouth to her ear and spoke so that she could only be heard at their table.
Shane: Good….Im glad nothing happened.
Dash: Whys that?
Shane: Cause your first time with a chick shouldnt be with some random baby ***** in a bathroom, when ten years from now you wont remember her name…youre gonna remember your first time forever, it should be with someone worth remembering.
Alice sat watching the intimate moment. She was completely undone by Shanes ability to open up and say the right things to calm the young girl down. If she didnt know any better, shed say Shane was actually good with kids. She also found herself thinking about what Shane said. Shane shared herself with Alice and it was her first time letting anyone have ***** with her. Was Alice the person who was worth remembering ten years down the road? Had she waited for Alice to come to her, or was it just a situation they found themselves in?
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SO GREAT. Can hardly wait for my next fix. And Shane go to see THE doctor. I just hope she will not end up with AIDS. Anything else but not this one. Alice really start to regret her action. I don’t feel Shane is ready to give her another chance though, at least not now. Go write my next fix ~wink~
Well done!!!! If this was a rush job you sure wouldn’t know it from the writing. It was funny,emotional, and flowed beautifly. Alice is finally getting to see another side of Shane,Dash and Bette, now she needs to take a good look at herself. Great chapter as always. Thanks , please post soon.
bett done cry : ( danm u shane, oh my god will alice ever get back with shane, and dash, lord help her, she needs to get laid big time
Again, a great chapter. Now, what about Alice ? OK she was wrong but Shane wasn’t all innocent… And Shane needs to go to the doctor.
This where we meet Daisy, Shane going to the Dr, and Dash is scare spitless. Love this.
Hey there, missed your story and so gald there was a chapter for me to read when I came back from work!! I take my pills like Dash and Shane, glad to know I’m not the only one!! Amazing as always and eagerly awaiting the next installment!! =0)
FInally, been waiting for what liked seemed forever, great job as usual.Its as good as drinking a watermelon smirnoff ha ha ha.
POOR ALICE,soon it’ll happen!RIGHT?LOVED THE CHAPTER.PLEASE POST SOON
Wow this chapter is surprise and awesome. This is like everybody will have proplem to themselves, anyway glad Alice there and see what she need to see and now let see what happen next. Post soon, thank you! Great chater!
I see Daisy made a appearance. Good Job with this chapter. Waiting to see where you take this.
I loved this chapter, but you know that I love everything you right. I can’t wait to see how it pans out.
Glad you’re back! Like the fact you included Daisy. Can’t wait until the next installment; you’re full of surprises!