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The Promise
Dr. Solano: Youre right….life sucks.
Shane was taken back by the womans uncanny remark.
Dr. Solano: Sorry its a bad habit. …anyway, the pants have velcro, so youll be fine.
Shane looked down between her legs and saw that the pants had velcro so the entire seat could come undone.
Dr. Solano: Okay, Shane…uhm…I mean Sam….
Shane bit her lip and became nervous at the doctors slip.
Dr. Solano: Dont worry…the papers say Sam….Bette was clear…anyway, we have some tests to run and I would like to do a thorough examination of you…I know it was a struggle to get you here, but we really need to check how everythings been going since the surgery since you stopped with the examinations and follow ups….anyway thats the technical stuff….I read your file, but files are files….were going to be here for awhile today, and Id like you to tell me what really happened.
Doctor Solano sat back and propped her head on her hand as she placed her elbow on the bed Shane sat on. Shane took a deep breath and relaxed her legs. As She extended them she crossed her legs and leaned back til she was propped up on her elbows. Doctor Solano Tossed a heavy folder into Shanes lap and looked her dead in the eyes.
Dr. Solano: I can read case history all day…I can also look at a patient and see what theyve been through…I can see you have a broken nose…which youve been picking at the stitches…..a broken wrist done by someone who knows how meddlesome you are….and an ankle that might have ligament damage….which wont get much better since you refuse to elevate it.
Shanes eyes went wide as the doctor elevated one of the stirrups on the edge of the table and motioned for Shane to put her bad foot in it. Shane placed her foot in it and noticed it was padded, and didnt seem as cold and intrusive as the old ones.
Dr. Solano: Talk to me Shane……you explain to me what happened.
Shane opened the folder and began going through her medical history. They continued to talk for ten minutes as Shane explained the details of her medical history in a barely audible voice. When she was halfway through the file she came to several photos. Photos shed never been privy to see and she felt the bile rising in her stomach. She went pale and froze as she saw the pictures of the damage that had been done to her body years ago. Damage that countless doctor visits couldnt fix, until Father Joe finally gave up forcing her to go.
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious