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The Promise
Woman: Oops…sorry I have to buzz you in.
The buzzer rang, and Shane opened the door. As it closed behind her she found herself in another world. The floor was covered in a black plush carpet with sporadic pink swirls in it. There were overstuffed black leather couches with pink etched designs throughout the room. She walked over to the woman sitting behind a desk and stood before her.
Woman 2: Who are you here to see maam?
Shane: Uhm…I dont know, I just…eh…it was set up by my friend…uhm Bette..
Woman 2: AH Mrs. Porters friend I see…..yes Ive been keeping my eye out for you…she said you were a special case.
Shane: A special case!
Woman 2: Oh calm down, I wasnt given any details, just told you hate doctors….but here we specialize in you comfort…now Ms…..OConnor……You will be with Dr. Solano today…..take this, and have a seat, we will be with you in a moment.
Shane took the device the woman handed her and moved to one of the open couches. She sat down tapping her foot nervously while biting on her bottom lip and rubbing her eyebrow. She checked out the device the woman gave her and noticed it was a pager much like the ones they used at the trendy theme restaurants like Planet Hollywood, to let you know youre table was ready. Shane was startled when the woman was crouching down beside her handing her a cup of coffee.
Woman 2: Three shots of our Italian espresso….now let me go through things since its your first time with us. When you get buzzed you go through the door. The number on the back tells you which door to go in down the hall. There will be clothes in there for you to change into, and you can wait for the doctor….now Mrs. Porter didnt specify, but you can get a massage while you are here…we keep one on staff…its not covered by medical, but many of the women often get a half hour quickly before or after seeing their doctor….Normally there is an interview process, but I put you through because it seemed important….any questions
Shane: This guy…Dr. Solano he interviews patients…
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious