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The Promise
Bette: Thanks Tee.
Tina gave Bette a quick kiss and placed one on Shanes temple as she cupped her head.
Tina: Youll figure it out babywhatever it isyouve got a family thats here to help.
Dash walked in eating a breakfast sandwich and stopped when she saw them. She turned off the music and everyone turned to look at her.
Dash: I cant ***** believe youlook at youyou broke my dog!…Come on boy!Achilles?
Achilles raised his head upon hearing his name. He looked from Shane to Dash, then lowered his head back to the floor and went to sleep.
Dash: Punk! ShaneuhmAlice calledshe would really like to talk to you .she said shed call back.
Shane turned back to the window and took a long drag from her cigarette.
Tina: UhmOkay Dash lets get going.
Dash went to the closet and grabbed some of Shanes clothes before hurrying off to the bathroom.
Bette: You miss her dont you?
A single tear threatened to fall from Shanes eye but she willed it back into her ducts, like the emotional soldier she was.
Bette: Just call hershe wants you back
Shane: Its overShe doesnt deserve me.
Bette finished wrapping Shanes ankle only in time for her to get up and walk towards the kitchen. Shane walked over to the counter and saw two breakfast sandwiches with a note in Tinas handwriting that said EAT!. Shane sat up on the counter and leaned back until her head plopped against the cabinets. Bette grabbed one sandwich and handed the other to Shane as she started eating.
Bette: Mmmthis is pretty goodbetter than at PierresI didnt know Dash could cook.
Shane shrugged as the house phone line rang.
Bette: Shouldnt you get that?
Shane shook her head, not bothering to look at Bette.
Bette: The only person I would pick up for right now is Dashand shed just call your cell.
The phone continuously rang until the machine picked it up.
Youve reached Shane Jenny and Shanes houseleave a message
Bette stopped chewing when she heard a guitar strumming away on the machine. She looked at Shane in confusion. Shane bit on her bottom lip and stared at the machine waiting for whatever she knew was coming from Alice.
I miss the ocean
I miss the time we made love under the stars
I miss the warm summer breeze
I miss those big old fancy cars
I miss the blue blue sky
I miss the world we made too
But most of all baby
I miss you
Oh I miss you
Shane put her sandwich down and covered her face with her hands. When she pulled them away and looked up, Bette was holding out the cordless phone for her.
Bette: Just call her
Shane took the phone and just stared at it.
Shane: NoI need top do something I should have done a long time ago.
Bette: Whats that?
Shane: I justI need your help.
Bette: With what?
Shane: I need a rideand I need you to help me pack.
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(21 votes, average: 4.52 out of 5)
great update – im glad you’re still writing!! Even if the others are mia! Go Shane – get your girl back!
Yet another amazing update which took away the pain of my blisters enough for me to do my *happy dance* ;)My little break from my story should be over soon if you’re still interested…. and thanx again for the update =0)
5* for you. A great chapter. What does Shane want to do ?
Shane: It’s over…She doesn’t deserve me. Wow and then the song… just wow. Get on with the rest girl.
this is a great story I can’t wait for your next post please post it soon
GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
You got me on a cliffhanger. Where the hell Shane is going. it’s not looking to be Alice place. Ok I need to calm down. I’m trusting you with that. Ok hon, I really need a fix soon. ~wink~
Wow!!! This chapter was incredable. The story just flows Beautifly. I’m glad Alice is making an effort to get Shane back. I don’t know What Shane is up to but I know You will make it work in the end. I’m sorry I didn’t Comment on the last chapter I read it at 3 o’clock in the morning And thought I would have time today to comment before You posted again. Thank you for all the extra effort You have made to post this wonderful story it made my week .
God i whish i had dated a Dash in highschool, but i’ll just stick with this on chick, keep on writting : P
Good chapter. Poor Alice and now let see what Shane is up to and hope she going to talk to Alice and be together. Post soon, thank you!