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The Promise
Alice: Yeah I guessjust please dont be harsh after all these years, I think we could have a civilized conversation.
Dash: Okayalthough that was a great soliloquy that Shakespeare himself would have bowed down to
Alice: Solar who?
Dash: Soliloquyits a speech done by one character to themselves in their head, or on stage whenforget iteither way, Im gonna have to say NoIm flattered but No
Alice: What?…But why?
Dash: Because this is Dashand although I could use a Sugar Mama to take care of me right now
Alice: What?!? Why didnt you
Dash: Say anything?
Alice: Yeah I thought
Dash: That I was Shane?
Alice: Well You
Dash: Sound like her aye?
Alice: Yeah so
Dash: Naturally you thought it was her.
Alice: Well this is
Dash: Her cell phone?
Alice: STOP IT!!!
Dash: Whats the matter? Not so much fun when someone cuts you off before you can finish a sentence aye?
Alice rolled her eyes and Dash gave a deep chuckle.
Alice: Can I talk to her?
Dash: I dont know you just woke mewhat time is it anyway?
Alice: Seven usually shes
Dash: *****…we should have got up an hour ago.these meds put me in a coma man
Alice: Alright, go wake her then.
Dash: Wellhow about you go work on that speech a little more, and then get back to her.
Alice: It was no good?
Dash: Oh No it was goodbut uhmit should be from the heartnot rehearsed…and it should be a conversationnot an ultimatum cause lately shes been so pissed she might just say ***** off.
Alice: Trueokay Ill call back in a few minutes.
Dash: Okaygood luck.
Alice: Hey Dashuhmthanks.
Dash: No problem AlI think you make her happy.I want Shane to be happy.
Dash hung up the phone and went to wake up Shane. She could hear music pounding from her bedroom and the door was locked. She banged on the door for a few minutes with no answer from the other side. Finally, she went to the front porch to see Bette and Tina getting into the Saab in their driveway. Dash yelled and waved for them to come over, which they quickly did without hesitation. They came into the house and Dash told them how shed woken to the music but Shane wouldnt let her in. She couldnt explain all of the details of the situation because Tina was still left in the dark as far as the whole Alice and Shane situation. The three made their way back to Shanes room, where Tina pounded away on the door.
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(21 votes, average: 4.52 out of 5)
great update – im glad you’re still writing!! Even if the others are mia! Go Shane – get your girl back!
Yet another amazing update which took away the pain of my blisters enough for me to do my *happy dance* ;)My little break from my story should be over soon if you’re still interested…. and thanx again for the update =0)
5* for you. A great chapter. What does Shane want to do ?
Shane: It’s over…She doesn’t deserve me. Wow and then the song… just wow. Get on with the rest girl.
this is a great story I can’t wait for your next post please post it soon
GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
You got me on a cliffhanger. Where the hell Shane is going. it’s not looking to be Alice place. Ok I need to calm down. I’m trusting you with that. Ok hon, I really need a fix soon. ~wink~
Wow!!! This chapter was incredable. The story just flows Beautifly. I’m glad Alice is making an effort to get Shane back. I don’t know What Shane is up to but I know You will make it work in the end. I’m sorry I didn’t Comment on the last chapter I read it at 3 o’clock in the morning And thought I would have time today to comment before You posted again. Thank you for all the extra effort You have made to post this wonderful story it made my week .
God i whish i had dated a Dash in highschool, but i’ll just stick with this on chick, keep on writting : P
Good chapter. Poor Alice and now let see what Shane is up to and hope she going to talk to Alice and be together. Post soon, thank you!