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The Promise
Bette: ShaneI swear to God, open this ***** door.
Bette reached up over the frame of the door, and found one of the skeleton keys to open the door.
Tina: Baby you dont think she
Tina had a terrified look on her face and Bette made a quick glance in Dashs direction.
Tina: Dash Hun, lets go make something to eat, we probably wont have time to go to the Planet now.then we can drop you off at
Dash: Ive seen it all beforebut fine, Ill get out of your way.
Dash turned on her heels and sulked over to the kitchen.
Bette: Baby, just explain that Shane might not want her to see her in whatever state shes in.
Bette unlocked the door as Tina walked off to check on Dash.
Bette pushed the door open to a hazy smoke filled room. She could hear Gone by NSync blasting from the laptop Shane had hooked up to an old set of speakers. Shane sat in the window vane with a cigarette dangling from her hand. Her swollen ankle hung over the edge of the seat next to Achilles who barely lifted his eyes to acknowledge Bettes existence. Bette moved cautiously towards Shane and sat at the opposite end of the bench. She lifted Shanes ankle, causing her to jump since she hadnt noticed Bettes initial entrance. Bette propped Shanes ankle up in her lap as she sat down.
Shane: Im not highI swear.
Bette: I didnt askcause I know youre notyoure hurting.
Shane turned her attention back outside. Bette reached down and took out the books that were wedged under her leg. She found Shanes worn copies of Hamlet, and The Outsiders. Bette placed them on the floor and peeled back Shanes pant leg to look at her swollen ankle. Just then, Tina popped her head in.
Bette: Its okay babycan you grab the Ace bandage from the bathroom?
Tina rushed in and tossed the bandages to Bette.
Tina: Is everything
Bette: Yeahjust a little self loathing because of the accidents that keep happening.
Tina: Uhm Okay, you tow look like you need to talk, so Im gonna drop Dash off early and head to work.
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(21 votes, average: 4.52 out of 5)
great update – im glad you’re still writing!! Even if the others are mia! Go Shane – get your girl back!
Yet another amazing update which took away the pain of my blisters enough for me to do my *happy dance* ;)My little break from my story should be over soon if you’re still interested…. and thanx again for the update =0)
5* for you. A great chapter. What does Shane want to do ?
Shane: It’s over…She doesn’t deserve me. Wow and then the song… just wow. Get on with the rest girl.
this is a great story I can’t wait for your next post please post it soon
GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
You got me on a cliffhanger. Where the hell Shane is going. it’s not looking to be Alice place. Ok I need to calm down. I’m trusting you with that. Ok hon, I really need a fix soon. ~wink~
Wow!!! This chapter was incredable. The story just flows Beautifly. I’m glad Alice is making an effort to get Shane back. I don’t know What Shane is up to but I know You will make it work in the end. I’m sorry I didn’t Comment on the last chapter I read it at 3 o’clock in the morning And thought I would have time today to comment before You posted again. Thank you for all the extra effort You have made to post this wonderful story it made my week .
God i whish i had dated a Dash in highschool, but i’ll just stick with this on chick, keep on writting : P
Good chapter. Poor Alice and now let see what Shane is up to and hope she going to talk to Alice and be together. Post soon, thank you!