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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 29
He called me a weak woman, Bette. Said that I was a weak woman and a bad mother because all I had to do was sit home and enjoy the life hed provided me with, and I couldnt even do that right..All of it just made me more and more miserable. You were the only thing keeping me sane, but I only got to see you from 4-10. I had the rest of the day to be sad and alone. And then.I ran into David at one of your fathers mixers.
Janice smiled uncomfortably as she shared this part of the story. The image of Bette walking in on the two of them in the throes of passion had forever been seared in her mind and made it difficult for her to discuss the man that had saved her from herself.
David and your father were partners in some real-estate deals. We met at the mixer and just.clicked. Melvin was burning the candle at both ends.trying to do the real-estate thing and still stay on top of things with AT&T. Hed have meetings scheduled with David and forget about them. So, Dave and I wound up spending more time together than wed ever planned on. He just made me feel so.valuedappreciated. Like I was worth something. Things Id forgotten after so many years of feeling worthless. I was like a school girl and I got careless.and thats when you walked in on us.
And Bette, Im so sorry about that. I really messed up., said Janice.
Bette nodded and her mother continued.
And then I just felt I had to go. David had been talking about me leaving with him and going to
I never called or contacted you because I was ashamed. I was ashamed of what youd seen. I was ashamed of the image I thought youd have of me. My mind was running wild with the awful stories I thought your father must have been telling you about me. I thought it was best I stayed away. I thought youd hate me.
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(48 votes, average: 4.06 out of 5)
WOW an amazing chapter great job!!!!!
fanstic chapter the road to forgiveness is not smooth
Simply amazing MTS! Amazing. I know that Bette used the f word a lot. I don’t think that’s it though. Can’t wait for more!
hmmm Bette saying goddam? Great chapter… please post soon!
WOW…just..just WOW. That was intense. Since you updated I think I will tomorrow. Just for giving us a great chapter. Thats my thank you.LOL.
Her mother explains herself and makes it almost acceptable.
Was the word – p*ss? It seems a bit coarse for you!
Is Bette going to tell Janice about Tina? I don’t think she should, how can she trust her?
Thanks for posting another chapter of this touching story.
OMG Simply amazing! I’m speechless. There are no words to express how good this is…..
Thank you, wonderful chapter – very emotional and compelling.
aaaaawwwwww **sniff sniff**
I’m so touched, this chaPPY BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYEZ..
Loved it! Thank you, it was beautiful! Was the word Prada by any chance?? hehe!
Another amazing chapter! Was the word endearment? I don’t know why but that struck me as the one. Please post soon I’m addicted!
MTS…I’m in awe! It was great! Thank you so much. I can’t wait to read more!
K
Amazing and wonderful chapter, are you trying to make me cry? LOVE it so much. So sweet. Can’t wait for more, don’t stay gone too long.
Wonderful chapter. I’m agreeing with the others that the mystery word is ‘piss’.
MTS… great job as usual…glad they talked and bette listened… only one thing bothers me… THE MELVIN will be home soon… and will the shit hit the fan then…. i hope bette tells her mom about her and tina…. thanks again looking for the next ch
this sis such a great story
Wow!!! Great chapter as always, and very powerful. *sniff sniff* Was the word “Pee,” or “piss,” OR when Bette said “Jump you?”
hey was the word PISS by Tina?
I’ve just read about 6 of the last chapters, and it’s just amazing. I am loving this story so much. Please keep it going. I love the progress our girls are making, and the incorporation of Bette’s family. Great work, please keep it coming.
just ot done reading all of your story. have absolutely loved it. i love how it started at school. a starting place for many of us. loved the no sex thingy. i think having bette tell her mom about tina will be good. also when mel finds out about out girls, mom can save the day, as usua. post soon
Wow this is so amazing and awesome, love it. Post soon, thanks!
awwwww.. so touching :]
Let’s see the word never used by a character, could that be Bette saying FUCK or Bette saying “NO SEX T” LOL
I’m glad her mother got the chance to explain and that Bette is releasing some of the pain she’s been carrying around all those years. Tina’s has and is doing a good job but I think Bette needs her mom to fully help her heal. (I wouldn’t trust her though)
I’m going to have to say piss…or Happy Holidays- : D
A Moving update! Reconcilliation is never easy but worth it. You have ways with your words. Looking forward to the next update. And the NO SEX thing was just too hillarious!
I’m late for an appointment now but when I see your chapter I can’t not read it:) “making-out”???
aaawwwww!!! that was so sweet. glad bette and janice are gonna be ok is bette gonna tell her about tina???
I don’t buy Janice’s explanation. I can empathize with her pain, confusion, and lack of esteem. But since she saw Bette from afar, she should’ve attempted to reach/contact her–even with cards. There are no excuses—just forgiveness.
MTS,
Bravo!
Yet again you have written an astounding piece of prose. The narrative just pulls me in and demands my attention. Your marvellous talent has created and developed the characters into a real, living and breathing world that I care about. Thank you for this joy. I always feel a little bit brighter after having read your work.
Awaiting the next installment.
Your loyal fan.
PS is the word ‘enlightenment’?
Amazingly written. Stunning
I’m another one of your silent readers who waits anxiously for each post. This is quite simply a great story. Your patience in unfolding it at just the right tempo has kept me utterly enchanted with your work. Thanks MTS!
Oh how amazing. The question is now that Bette has her mother’s love will it impact her relationship with Tina? Will Bette tell mom about Tina? Wow the beauty of your story so well told that we all want more. Thanks
this amazing chapter brought tears to my eyes. thank you, this story is just so… wow
Wow, absolutely great. I always look for your posts. This story just gets better and better. nice job.
Beautiful, MTS. Thanks for the emotions and the tears. You really know how to touch people.
Megga- That was a GREAT chapter! And sooo long, thank you thank you! I really do love this story and hope you post again soon!
Wow – You nailed the landing — Excellent work.
I love this story. My first time to ever comment to you. I have been reading it for a long time. Keep up with the great work. I love your stories. I look forward to the next one, cant wait!!
Oh MTS, you sure do know how to bring tears to a gal’s eyes!! Beautiful chapter…outstanding…so much emotions…and B&T’s semi-foreplay in the beginning wasn’t too bad as well;)…hehe…thank you, please do update soon!
Now why couldn’t you have written this for the show so it would have filled in the gap about Bette’s mother! Good going.
WOW, amazingly touching. Sure hope that Janice is being sincere. Can’t wait to see how things play out.