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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 38
Melvin served as the reality check that brought them back to the present. His heavy hand rapped on the door and both women sat up with a start, they’d been teetering on the soothing edges of slumber.
“Bette! Kit’s here.”, he called.
Bette rubbed at her eyes and replied, “Okay, Daddy. We’ll be right down.”
Tina smiled at her girlfriend and they shared a soft, gentle kiss before gathering their things and heading downstairs.
They were nearly into the foyer when Bette heard her father’s condescending voice float in from the kitchen.
“So, just what is it you’re doing for a living these days?”, he asked.
Kit sighed, “I told you, Dad. I’m producing an album right now. I spend a lot of time in the studio, trying to get the sound just right.”
“This is what has become of my first born. When are you going to get a real job and stop wasting your life?”, he asked.
“Daddy, I’m not wasting my life. Starting N2Soul was the best thing I ever did. We had a great thing going. Matter of fact, I’m still doing okay. When are you going to recognize that I really do have talent? When are you finally going to tell me you’re proud of me?”, she asked, her voice raising in frustration.
Melvin looked down into Kit’s brown eyes and said, “When you finally do something to be proud of.”
Bette had reached the two of them by this time and she couldn’t help but speak up for her older sister.
“Daddy, Kit really has accomplished a lot. Kids at school can’t believe that she’s really my sister. I’m proud of her.”
Melvin turned to Bette and stared harshly at her, dismissing her importance with the tone of his voice.
“Elizabeth, you know not of what you speak. You’re still thinking like a child. When you finally start to think like and adult, you’ll understand and realize what a waste my parenting efforts have been with Katherine.”
Kit threw up her hands and replied, “I don’t know why I even waste my time talking to you. You’re always passing judgment on everyone. Tell me something. Who’s your judge, Daddy?”
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(46 votes, average: 4.11 out of 5)
brb
Aunt Karen is gettin her grove on. LOL!!!!
powerful. i have a melvin. what in the name of god does he think hes doing. the pain that is given, the insecurities sometimes seem insurmountable from someone like this. this was very real. loved the bonding momenys and the janice part. i think shes trying. thanks this was great.
It’s always a pleasure reading another wonderful chapter of this story!
MTS… love your story… but you know that… to bad we didn’t see aunt karen again… maybe she could visit them at school
Great chapter!! How do you do it, you write so well! I hope you can continue to smile, because you’ve seriously got GREAT talent. :D
That was great. I think if I was Kit me and Melvin would have been rolling around on the floor. I almost choaked him through the screen. Damn. Im sureyou have drama in the fuure so this was a nice way to end their visit. I hope Bette and her mother are able to form some type of a realtionship.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Two cools points for the special. Excellent chapter.
Oh boy…Aunt Karen is back in full effect. YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Always great to see an update from you. Melvin is such an ass. I feel bad for Kit. Glad Bette is being supportive. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Extra smiles just for you!!!
Thank you for another wonderful chapter! Sorry your life is a little hectic/stressful. Your stories ease the stress in mine. :=D
Melvin is an ass:::
Great to have you back. Wonderful update. Just love how things are coming together, well at least where the women in the family are concerned. Melvin, is another story.
Aunt Karen’s preoccupied,huh!!!
Melvin is a ass!!!!!!! nice up date
MELVIN IS SO UPTIGHT…MTS GREAT JOB..THANKS
hi i love the stories but one quick question are you single or taken at this point in your life i want to know where the deepness is coming from
So very glad to have you back. What a jerk Melvin is…at least now both B&T got to see how he reacted to Kit being pregnant…..he would totally flip if he found out the truth about B&T’s loving relationship.
YOu know, you are always the first one I check to see updates from. When I find one, I know that I will have a great day.
Great chapter, MTS! I’m glad Bette was able to feel her mother’s love again, even for just a little bit. Can’t wait to see what school has in store for our girls. Thanks!
:)))))) that’s how I look when I see your update. Have a great day!!! :)
Hey MTS great chapter. Too bad Aunt Karen was absent. B&T are wonderful.
Go aunt Karen! Yeah… Tina’s a keeper since the start! Ugh, Melvin – what goes around comes around. If you think that your daughter’s life a mess, then you might want to look at yourself and see what’s causing it.
Great chapter and great song. If it’s the song i’m thinking of, i used to play it all the time. Take care of our girls, i’ve really grown attached to them. Was it Tina Marie??
K
Great chapter. Still love this so much. Glad things are good with them.
I missed you! Good update :) Perhaps Aunt Karen can come visit campus? So glad Kit put Melvin in his place.
Still LOVE this story!
Melvin is such a bastard! He should be proud of Kit’s success. And Tina is definately a keeper. Great chapter can’t wait for more!
You make me smile
You make me sing
You make me feel good everything
Guess who’s back! I just caught up with this amazing fanfic. I really like where it has gone, with Bette’s family and all. Please continue!
Good chapter. I can’t believe Melvin said the slut word to Kit. Ok Aunt Karen have something to do and maybe she will visit Bette later. Post soon, thanks!