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    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 38

    Story written on August 8, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
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    Bette and Tina say goodbye (B&T beginning set on college campus)

     

    Melvin pursed his lips and looked sternly into the eyes of his oldest child. “Katherine, that’s enough.”

     

    “Is it? Is it really? The man that can’t keep it in his pants is the one coming down on me. I’ve been all over the world touring and performing. I have 6 albums behind me and 4 gold records hanging on my wall. I’ve made a lot of mistakes. I know that, but I’m trying. Even when I try my best it still isn’t good enough for you.”

     

    “Your best? You had a brilliant mind and what did you do? You wasted your potential. Spending your time running around like a wild woman on the stage. You spent every dime you had on liquor and extravagances you didn’t need. Now where are you? Back at square one. If you had listened to me, you would be a success right now. With a stable life and a stable home.”

     

    “Stable home? Like the stable home you provided for me? Running out on my mother when Janice came along. Running out on Bette’s mother when you got tired of her. That doesn’t sound very stable to me.”

     

    Melvin smiled haughtily at these remarks and folded his arms across his chest. “Don’t confuse my minor mistakes with the lifetime of disappointments you’ve created for yourself.”

     

    “Minor mistakes? Breaking up two marriages because you couldn’t keep it in your pants is not minor. Being so angry and hostile that your daughters don’t even know you isn’t minor. You have a blatant disregard for everyone else’s feelings. Your happiness is the only thing that matters to you. And you wonder why I started drinking.”, said Kit.

     

    Melvin slowly shook his head, his placid demeanor beginning to crack as he gritted his teeth and responded. “You ungrateful, petulant child. Don’t you dare blame your failures on me. If anything, you’ve always done everything to spite me.”, he began.

     

    Kit’s hand found itself resting against her hip. “Spite you? Daddy, there is not enough time in my life to do everything to spite you. You don’t approve of anything I do.”

     

    “You don’t do anything worthy of my approval.”

     

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    3. powerful. i have a melvin. what in the name of god does he think hes doing. the pain that is given, the insecurities sometimes seem insurmountable from someone like this. this was very real. loved the bonding momenys and the janice part. i think shes trying. thanks this was great.

    7. That was great. I think if I was Kit me and Melvin would have been rolling around on the floor. I almost choaked him through the screen. Damn. Im sureyou have drama in the fuure so this was a nice way to end their visit. I hope Bette and her mother are able to form some type of a realtionship.

    9. Always great to see an update from you. Melvin is such an ass. I feel bad for Kit. Glad Bette is being supportive. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Extra smiles just for you!!!

    12. Great to have you back. Wonderful update. Just love how things are coming together, well at least where the women in the family are concerned. Melvin, is another story.

    17. So very glad to have you back. What a jerk Melvin is…at least now both B&T got to see how he reacted to Kit being pregnant…..he would totally flip if he found out the truth about B&T’s loving relationship.

      YOu know, you are always the first one I check to see updates from. When I find one, I know that I will have a great day.

    18. Great chapter, MTS! I’m glad Bette was able to feel her mother’s love again, even for just a little bit. Can’t wait to see what school has in store for our girls. Thanks!

    21. Go aunt Karen! Yeah… Tina’s a keeper since the start! Ugh, Melvin – what goes around comes around. If you think that your daughter’s life a mess, then you might want to look at yourself and see what’s causing it.

    22. Great chapter and great song. If it’s the song i’m thinking of, i used to play it all the time. Take care of our girls, i’ve really grown attached to them. Was it Tina Marie??

    28. Guess who’s back! I just caught up with this amazing fanfic. I really like where it has gone, with Bette’s family and all. Please continue!

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