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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice: Chapter 8
“Not really. He’ll tolerate me briefly but he’s ashamed of me, too. I’m having this baby and I have no plans on staying with the father. He doesn’t like that. He doesn’t like that I’ve taken Bette’s side with this whole Tina thing. Daddy is acting like a spoiled brat who can’t have his way. And I know he feels bad about turning his back on Bette, but he’s too stubborn to admit he was wrong.”
Janice sighed. “Sounds like the Melvin I know.”
“Not much has changed.”
“I just..I don’t want him to hate her. Because even though she doesn’t talk about it….I know the distance between them bothers her. She loves that man. He’s a piece of work, but she really loves him.”
“I know. I’m working on him.”
“Well, please don’t work too hard. You have two to think about now.”
There was a brief knock on Janice’s closed door, followed by the appearance of her secretary’s head.
Janice held up a finger, indicating she’d be only a moment.
“Kit, I hate to interrupt our call, but I believe I’m late for a meeting. I’ll check in on you later and please tell your mother I said hello.”
“I will. Thanks for calling.”
Their call ended and Janice turned her attention to the administrative assistant at her door.
The loving voice that always soothed her aches slipped up from the phone at her ear and replied, “I’m sorry, Baby. I didn’t mean to. What did I do?”
“I don’t know….I couldn’t even seem to think straight. I just kept thinking about you. What are doing to me, Bette?”
“Loving you.”
“Yeah, yeah. Did you cast a spell on me or something?”
Bette chuckled. “No. I’m not into witchcraft. Maybe I’ll take that up next.”
“No. Please no. I’m already bad off as it is.”
“I love you, T.”
“I love you, too.”
“What are Alice and Dana up to?” asked Bette.
“I don’t know. I don’t think Dana’s back from practice yet. Alice was vegging out online earlier. We’re supposed to go to dinner in a little while.”
“I miss them.”
“I know you do. I can tell. Did you have a good time today with Damon?”
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peachpip says
These girls are just so into each other they’re having trouble staying focused. I agree with bombasticbully. There is drama up ahead!! I love your long posts. Thanks for sharing your talent with us once again. PPS
trecelovinit says
MTS–I’m sensing drama on the horizon in the guise of Debbie and Eric! Let’s get Bette and Tina together in LA sooner than the 2 weeks! I’m holding up a banner in hopes that will happen. PPS
albeez says
thx for the update.
pattifloatn says
You know that summer is over with and schools are back in session? Bette and Tina are trying so hard to survive with this long distance between them. Please help them to continue to want to stay together.
lucero2557 says
Awww MTS, you just made our day brighter! B’s reunion with Damon was very charming. They have been through a lot and they are sincerely bonded as close friends. Hmmm As for B meeting Debbie in the flesh, it was quite an experience for her, as they both share the same uncomprehension from some members of their families. Janice is being more perceptive of her daughter and we could appreciate her concern about B missing his father. B&T’s conversation was so sweet and honest, as usual. We smiled when Tina’s green monster of jealousy was so evident, while learning about Debbie. But above all, you can breathe and feel the magic of their love. You are taking us into a wonderful ride. Thanks for this marvellous update, MTS. We truly enjoyed it! PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
bettefortina says
This story just keeps getting better and better. PPS MTS!
tbte409 says
Love this story, MTS. Isn’t it time to get Bette and Tina together? Looking forward to your next post. PPS!
pepper29x says
Just finshed reading story hope you update soon its been to long
Roxxie says
Waiting….and waiting….and waiting. Won’t you continue?
sarm says
MTS, what happen? were are you? its been 2 whole years. i just found this story and was really in to it, and i thought that it being written a few years ago that it would be finished. NOTthe girls arn’t wispering to you any longer? Please, finish the story. its one of the best i’ve ever read. one of your silent readers. sarm
bombasticbully says
I really like the interaction between Tina and Bette. It’s light and loving. But I can sense drama up ahead… Thanks for posting! PPS
Lamentamini says
I’m glad Clay made the no-shit statement of the year. :P No really, good for him. I think he’ll be a great dad. :) *runs off to read*
beachlife says
awesome update! they are so missing each other! :)PPS
Lamentamini says
Shouldn’t Gina be smacked for the Mondays thing? :P PPS!
fergz1 says
thanks for the chapter! can’t wait for more.
resultsonly says
Loving the communication between the too, its all to good thats how I know something is going to try to screw with it. Damn those two weeks need to hurry.
sarah_schuster says
aww I like Debbie
akalittlered says
Still loving this!!! I hope Debbie and Eric will not be a problem for them. Thanks PPS
robbeedee says
Hello MTS, Great to have another wonderful piece of this puzzle from Your. I just adore the reality of Bette and Tina’s love for each other here. These girls so belong, willingly, to each other. There is not a question of that. And it is something that everyone around them can realize. David saw it, Debbie saw and even Gina saw it. They are so affected by each other that even 3000 miles can not quench their love and attraction. The night time calls are so sweet and precious. Can’t wait to reac more of this terrific tale. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
BetteAndTinaForever says
i trust Tina and Bette but i don’t trust others…keep them safe and reunite them soon…you can use witchcraft and speed up the time LOL
ut says
That was great and glad B&T talk, can’t wait to see they see each other again. Please more, thanks!
pepper29x says
I wish I wish you would come back and write again
MSFS says
favor continuar a historia please…………………..
nuevodka says
Hope all is well with your personal life and that you could post soon.
Merlion says
Hi MTS :-)I hope you are fine and safe. It’s been 4 years since your last post, hopefully you’ll be back and finishing this amazing story. Take care :-)
colenickel says
Just reread the entire series and its still as good as the first time i read it. I see its been several years since your last post, but i hope you still find your way back to us one day and finish this great little tale. Until then, i guess we will have to use our imagination! Thanks, MTS!
SassyGran says
What a shame that this great story is unfinished.
Amparo says
SVP SVP, achevée l’histoire!!!!!
Zhenya says
Great story you wrote! Maybe someday you might finish it