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The Secret Santa—Chapter 1
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I park on the side of the street and make my way inside to the teller and wait behind the customer in front of me. As I’m waiting, I look over to my right and see two women sharing a kiss and holding hands with their young son. Images of Bette and I with Angelica pass through my mind and I’m suddenly missing that intimacy and closeness Bette and I shared. I still love her. I never stopped. I just don’t know if I could ever trust her completely again so it’s best I never see her again. But then I think about Angie and that I am robbing her and Bette of knowing each other. Even though Bette broke my heart, I know she would be a good mother to Angie. I’m so torn. I really don’t know what to do.
I’m snapped from my thoughts by the teller calling and motioning to me to come to her. I walk up and slip my deposit to her under the window. She does her thing and slips me a deposit slip back with my balance on it. I thank her and look at the slip and gasp so loud I drew an audience. I turn back to face the teller.
”Excuse me. But there is some sort of mistake. I think you gave me someone else’s account balance” I say as I slide the deposit slip under the window back to her. She takes it and types on her keyboard then looks at me.
”Your account is 547325. Correct?” She asks and I nod. ”Well your balance total with today’s deposit is $26,278.45 U.S. Dollars.
I am about to faint and shake my head. ”Well? There must have been a deposit made to my account by mistake because I should not have that amount available” I argue and she smiles at me understanding my confusion.
”Ms. Kennard? There was a deposit wired to this account this morning in the amount of 25,000 U.S dollars.” She says and I gasp in shock. I feel light headed and really need to sit down but I quickly lean against the counter in front of the teller and collect my thoughts as she slides the deposit slip back to me.
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thank youu
This looks promising. I will follow. Am anxious to see what happens with The Diary. Thanks so much.
Pie, what a sweet, well-written start. I’ve only been around LesFan for a year or two, so I never had the privilege of reading your earlier works. I’m so glad you’ve come back and are sharing your wonderful talent with us. So looking forward to reading everything you throw at us.
Dear Pie,
The day gets better.
As usual you can make me laugh one minute and cry the next and you did it again. Christmas Carol is my favourite Dickens story and I look forward to the next post.
Off for a Cuppa
SG x
Looks very promising. So, who’s Secret Santa? Bridgette, Kit? I hope we’ll find out.
And please, don’t forget about Diary.
Hi Pie, i am looking forward to the next chapter.
I am so happy you bring this story back.
For me it is not a secret and i will try hard to not give any clues.
Love this. Thanks
Could Alice be the Secret Santa? lol……..there are no secrets with Alica
I had read the story several times when you publish it before. but I will read it again with pleasure!
Back for a reread!
Pie you should really have reposted this for this Christmas 2020.
Off to make a Cuppa before reading Chapter 2 ❤