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    The Shipwreck

     

    We carried on with the excursion, while my father drew the paths on his new map, starting from the point our tents were. From what I could see there was a lot of work to do, a lot of walking. It wasn’t a big island, since that morning from our camp we noticed that we could clearly see where the borders of the land started. But it was all new, and we needed to be careful.

    As we went ahead we came to a stop when we heard something.

    “Do you hear that?” my dad uttered. It was the sound of water. A fall, maybe. We hurried up and followed the sound. What we saw was something huge. In front of us, stood out what it looked like a temple. From what I learnt by reading my new books, it was a Khmer temple, not so different than those famous Buddhist temples I saw in the photographs, only smaller. The sound of water came from three falls that embraced the whole structure, which had been built on a steep hill.

    “Wonderful” I heard myself say, bringing my hands on my mouth. “That’s simply wonderful”

    “This thing must have been there for who knows how many years!” Aaron uttered.

    “Thousand years, you might say!” my father asserted.

    “These temples have been built eight hundred years before the Current Era”, I explained. I was so overwhelmed. I couldn’t believe we were seeing something that no one ever saw. The show that was performing before our eyes was only ours, we were the first and only audience ever. And I could see it by the way the bricks still had their original forms, no sign of human touch. Everything was as it had been left. And that was amazing. I took some steps closer, without approaching too much, as I felt like an intruder, to take it all in. Decorations were all over the bricks, carved into pieced of stucco applied to the walls. The doors frames were constructed entirely from Sandstone. That beauty totally swept me away.

    “Wait!” I was too captured by the spectacle that I didn’t notice Henry approaching the entrance of the temple. My dad stopped him immediately. “Wait, you can’t. You don’t know what kind of traps you may trigger if you touch that door. Khmer civilization surely knew how to protect their treasures”

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    Comments

    1. Zhenya says

      Hi! Thank you for the chapter!

      Long or short chapters – i like them all, main point – they exist.

      And Henry – such a “man”, especially when he running away.

      Bette in animal skin – nice)

    2. proteonomics says

      Hi Bette0Porter:

      This is a wonderful chapter, I think the size is okay, and I see that, like me, you also like the cliffhangers.

      Very interesting, so apparently Bette is a native and probably religious person, you let me intrigued with the native word, but I guess we’ll find out in the next chapters.

      Great, all the bunch of losers (Eric, Aaron, Josh, Henry) is in the crew, that is going to be funny.

      I hope Bette is not alone on that island; anyway, we’ll find out soon.

      Thanks for this kind gift, two chapters in one week. Please post soon.

      P

    3. SassyGran says

      Hi,
      I’ll accept any size Chapters just so long as they come regularly and are as good as these:-)

      Cliffhangers! Not a lover but will accept if the posts are regular :-)

      Think I’m going to like this Story :-) please post again soon.

      SG

    4. Bibi28 says

      Long or short chapters, i don’t care as long you post regularly!

      You brought in all those useless man in the story, gonna be fun to read.

      Henry is such a loser, throwing Tina on her ass when he is scared, such a alpha man 😁

      Bette in animal clothes, that is what i want to see 😍

      I enjoy this story a lot and look forward to the next chapter!!!

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