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Thoughts – Chapter 1
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I’ve never been so happy to hear my phone ring in my entire life. Getting Tonya to let me answer it was difficult, since she refused to stop kissing me as I picked it up. Still, I managed to talk in halting sentences to Al…dreaming the entire time of throwing this crazy bitch off me and going back to the room to ravage my best friend. Sadly, it didn’t get that far. Alice did sound a little jealous, but that might have just been my mind playing tricks on me. She just hung up after a minute or two, and Tonya went back to what she was doing.
I let her. I guess I was reasoning that Alice didn’t want me, even if I wanted her to. And this Tonya chick wasn’t entirely bad…way too perky and annoying for me, but she could be good for my career. And she seemed to like me…hell, she seemed starstruck by me. Whether I wanted her or not, it was nice to know that she seemed to want me. Which was more than I could say for Alice. She was my best friend and I know she loved me, but after the whole “I don’t wanna be one of those people who sleeps with her friends,” thing so long ago, I was positive that ship had already sailed.
As Tonya continued, I couldn’t help flashing back to when I’d met Alice years ago. It had started off promisingly enough. Hell, I’d thought she was gorgeous, and she seemed to like me. But as time went on, I realized how unfair it would be of me to try and hold her back. Alice never hid who she was, and my entire life was hiding.
Until the Subaru thing, that is. But even then, it didn’t seem to matter. So much time had passed and we’d been friends for so long that I was certain it’d never happen. I was still positive of that, even though I’d caught some glimpses lately…but I wasn’t going to think about that now. Not while I had a woman willing to give me everything.
Still, after she’d fallen asleep and started to snore loudly, I couldn’t help feeling a little sick. Deciding to leave before she could wake up, I left the room as quietly as I could and made my way back to the one my friends were in.
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great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.
i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps
What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.
Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.
Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!
Fantoosh guys! Man I hate Tonya, now even more!!
umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS
definitely continue. yes, yes please:D