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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
Tina’s breathing became very rapid, "Bette … turn me over."
Bette smiled, knowing what she meant. She let Tina roll over onto her stomach, and smoothed her hands over Tina’s back. She laid ontop of her again, letting the whole experience register in her mind as she slowly and teasingly inched Tina’s zipper down to her lower back.
Tina moaned with anticipation, pulling her hair up to make Bette’s task easier. The brunette couldn’t resist the opportunity, dipping in to kiss Tina’s neck. She smiled inwardly, knowing how crazy it would make her.
"Oh my god," Tina gasped, feeling Bette’s hands on her bare back and her lips on her neck. "Bette …"
It was difficult for Bette to pull away as Tina grinded slowly into her, but there were other things on the agenda. She whispered into Tina’s ear. "I’m turning you back over baby."
Tina helped her, staring up at her girlfriend as the brunette slowly lowered the top of her dress, her mouth dropping opened at the sight.
Bette’s breath caught in her throat when she pulled the dress down over Tina’s breasts for the first time. This was a whole new – much better – world. She parted her lips with the intention of speaking before she ran her hands up and gently cupped Tina’s soft, creamy breasts.
After swallowing hard and smiling up at Tina, she finally spoke. "Oh my god … Tina … you’re so beautiful …"
Tina smiled and arched up slightly, enjoying Bette’s wonderful hands on her naked flesh. She knew Bette could see her nipples harden and she could tell she liked it by the look on her face.
Bette leaned down and captured Tina’s lips again, also putting the blonde at ease with the worry of this new experience. She just hoped she could please Bette.
After some kissing, Bette’s lips travelled down Tina’s neck, sucking gently on the spot she knew would drive the blonde crazy. She grinned to herself while she let her tongue slip out, causing Tina to suck in a breath of air. She continued to knead Tina’s breasts slowly, rolling the hard little nubs between her fingers. Tina moaned loudly and held Bette’s head to her neck with hunger for more. She started moving her hips up to try grinding against the brunette, which made Bette realize just how much she did want it.
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)