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“Let’s not talk about it anymore, Bette. Let’s just enjoy being together.”
“Bette had given up on the idea that Tina was going to change her mind. It was over after tonight and nothing was going to change that. She looked over Tina’s shoulder at their hands which seemed to fit so perfectly. She was grateful that Tina wasn’t wearing the ring. She hated that damn ring. She had never met Eric and had no reason to hate him but she did. Tomorrow he would take away her happiness. Tomorrow. How would she get through tomorrow night, knowing that Tina was with him? The thought made her feel sick. She knew she would be taking a shopping trip to the liquor store tomorrow morning when Tina left.
“What are you thinking about? Tell me the truth.”
“I’m thinking about your honeymoon. He’s probably ready to explode. Have you really not been with him?” Tina paused knowing she had opened a can of worms.
“No, I haven’t and it hasn’t been easy, believe me. I don’t mean that it’s been difficult to stay away from him…you know what I mean.”
“Doesn’t he think it’s strange that you won’t have sex with him?”
“I lied and told him I had mono.”
Bette laughed despite herself. “For a year and a half?”
Tina turned around and laughed as well. “What can I say, he’s got a good heart but he’s not too bright.”
“I thought we weren’t going to talk about it?”
Bette played with her hair. “Sorry, you asked what I was thinking about.”
Tina touched her lips. “You know what I’m thinking about?” She licked her lower lip causing Bette to close her eyes.
“Uh, yeah I think I can guess.”
Tina kissed her pushing her tongue into Bette’s mouth. Before long they were in full-on make out mode. They were more aggressive with one another than they had ever been, feeling each other’s body with abandon. It lasted for thirty minutes before Bette pushed Tina off.
“No, no, don’t stop Bette, I need you. Please, I want to be with you, just once. I want to show you how much I love you even if it’s just for one night. I’ll never love anyone like I love you Bette. Give me one night that I can dream about for the rest of my life.”
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!