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She climbed up when she felt her walls tighten around her fingers, wanting desperately to see her cum. She maintained the pressure on her swollen clit with her thigh as she continued to thrust into her. Tina whimpered and moaned as Bette kissed her and when the moment arrived, Tina would swear for years after that no one had ever made her cum like Bette Porter did that day.
Tina held onto her afterwards not being able to catch her breath for several minutes. Bette continued to kiss her as she began to relax. “I love you, I love you Bette. I’m sorry, I’m so, so sorry.”
It was an acknowledgement of all they would lose in a few hours. Bette could feel her tears on her shoulder as she rubbed her back.
“Sshhh, T. I love you baby. Don’t cry.”
Tina pulled herself together and rolled over on Bette. The brunette brushed away the remaining tears on her face with her thumbs and smiled tenderly at her. She could see the love in Tina’s eyes and fought her own tears.
“I want you. I want to show you how much I love you too.” Bette said nothing as she allowed Tina to do whatever she wanted. She closed her eyes to memorize how her lips and her tongue felt all over her body. She needed to remember every detail. She looked down to see Tina flatten her tongue against her. Nothing had ever felt like this. She was high, in a dreamlike state as Tina took her as if they had been making love for years. It all seemed like an out of body experience and she looked down on it all knowing that her prediction would come true. Tina Kennard had ruined her for every other woman for the rest of her life. She came all over her hand and as she focused her sight on Tina licking her fingers, she thought she would pass out.
They made love over and over again, resting only when they had no breath left. They had not slept the entire night or even bothered to close the blinds. As the sun came up over the ocean she could feel Tina’s tears begin again. There was nothing left to say and the only comfort could be found in one another’s arms. They held on for dear life as if some invisible force was trying to break them apart. Bette could feel the pull deep within her heart and if it were possible for someone to feel their heart breaking, Bette was pretty sure this was it.
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!