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“I’m going to kiss every one of these freckles.” She smiled at her as Tina moaned at the touch of her hands. Bette did as she promised and kissed all over her body, leaving no spot unexplored. She used her teeth and her tongue gently to build Tina into a frenzy, purposely avoiding the one spot Tina needed her to give attention to the most.
“Bette…I…need.”
“I know exactly what you need and you’ll have more than you can take baby. Be patient and I’ll make it worth the wait.”
Tina could barely take the sound of her sexy voice. She knew that she had never been this wet for anyone before. They had only just begun and she knew if she died at this moment Bette would have satisfied her more than any lover ever had in her life.
Bette’s hands had touched every inch of her body and her mouth quickly approached her core. She watched as Bette looked up at her for a moment. Bette smiled as she spread Tina’s legs looking at her intended target. Tina helped her by spreading them further, inviting her in.
Bette started slow with her tongue setting a rhythm for her. Tina’s breathing matched the movement of her hips into Bette’s mouth. “You taste so good baby.”
Tina couldn’t help but mention God and Bette’s name over and over. It wasn’t something Bette was unused to but Tina was different. She would have never gone a year and a half without getting a woman she was seeing into bed and she certainly had never been celibate for that long either. None of her friends could understand why she no longer hung out and picked up girls with them. And at this moment when Bette’s tongue entered her, she knew it had been worth every minute of those eighteen months.
Tina pulled her legs back to her chest wanting Bette deeper. It was time to give her more, and she did. The brunette’s tongue found Tina’s clit and her fingers did the rest. Bette could feel her own wetness trickle down her legs as she added another finger. Tina’s screams of ecstasy and her fingers tangled in her hair were driving the brunette insane.
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!