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“Tina, I might cum watching you undress. You won’t disappoint me but we don’t have to do this. Really, we don’t have to do anything you don’t want to do. I just want to be close to you for as long as I can be; even if that means just sleeping.”
Tina backed up, making her mind up and unzipped her dress. She removed it from her shoulders and let it fall at her feet revealing the black lace lingerie she had worn just in case.
“I want you to do whatever you want to me tonight. I’m yours. No matter where I am, I’ll always be yours.”
Bette’s heart broke and melted at the same time. She was in love but she knew that Tina was easily the most beautiful thing she had ever seen.
“Let me see you Bette.”
The taller woman removed her tank top and pants slowly, watching Tina’s eyes glaze over with lust as she did. She couldn’t wait any longer to touch Bette’s beautiful skin. She got close to her putting her hands on her shoulders. Her skin was smooth and creamy.
“Everything Bette, please.”
Bette took Tina’s hands and brought them to the back of her bra. She reached around and undid Tina’s bra as her own came off. They could each see the other’s excitement both in the rise and fall of their chests and the hardening of their nipples. Bette could not wait to touch them and she knew they would not disappoint.
Tina’s breasts were soft and firm and they felt like heaven. Bette was so entranced by them that it startled her when she felt Tina touching her. They looked at one another and kissed, long and hard. Bette pushed her toward the bed causing Tina to fall back onto it. She removed her panties and slowly walked toward Tina was pushing herself back on the bed as she looked at Bette’s naked body.
“My, God Bette. You’re more beautiful than I could have imagined you.”
Bette slid her hands up Tina’s legs and reached for Tina’s last article of clothing. She looked into her eyes for permission. Her smile meant she had it and off it came. Bette threw them aside and looked at her body, laid out on the bed. Her womanly body was perfectly toned. She was thin but not skinny and she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named. Bette’s mouth watered and she wanted time to stop right at this moment.
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!