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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    Shane moaned, but it wasn’t so much a moan as it was a throaty growl that resonated from somewhere deep, somewhere primal. It induced shivers down Carmen’s spine but she never broke the rhythm in which her hips were moving.

    She could never get enough. To her, Shane had become a necessity for her to live like breathing. She lusted, loved, smiled, and cried for this woman and come ***** or high water she would find a way for Shane to be able to love with out holding back anything.

    At this point though, Shane didn’t care if she was standing in middle of Disney Land making out like a horny teenager; she wanted her and wanted her bad. She slid her hands up the expanse of Carmen’s smooth back, softly raking her nails as she brought her hand around to her stomach. Never missing a beat, she expertly unclasped the bra with her left hand and moved her right hand up-wards to cup Carmen’s heaving chest.

    “Oh God, wait…” Carmen barely managed to get out but Shane had other things in mind as she kneaded and massaged her breast. The very real risk of being caught scared her shitless but also excited her to no end.

    “Tell me you don’t want this” Shane said in an impossibly low husky voice. Carmen moaned and latched her mouth onto Shane’s neck, licking biting and sucking along her throat.

    She was slowly losing her wits, she needed to be closer, she needed more skin, she needed to be inside of her to bring her, to ecstasy and keep her there as long as she could… now.

    Shane drew her hand out of Carmen’s top and brought all of her nimble fingers to work on her jeans. This caused Carmen to stop her hickey inducing practices and hold Shane’s hands at bay. She wanted this so badly but not here. Any other time she would have been exstatic to have Shane rip her clothes off, lay her on these seats, and pump in and out of her until she couldn’t take it anymore; and then do it all over again. She was on a mission, she needed to know if Shane meant what she said that night….

    “Take me to your place”

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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