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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    Before long, Shane could feel fingers scratching lightly up and down her thigh which caused her to turn her head and look into the lust filled eyes of her Caramel Goddess.

    She watched as Carmen got up and seated her herself back down… straddling Shane’s lap. Her long delicate fingers, slid appreciatively up strong athletic thighs and found themselves home on her hips. Shane paused a moment to take in the beauty that was Carmen De la Pica Morales and silently thanked every shred of luck she had for allowing their paths to cross.

    She knew deep down inside that she didn’t deserve this beautiful woman. Even with of the things she’d done to redeem herself like getting off the streets, getting a steady job, looking out for her friends; none of it could ever erase her past. Carmen didn’t deserve someone who didn’t even know what love felt like, the love of a kindred spirit. All the emotions Shane felt when she was with her were so intense that it scared the living ***** out of her sometimes, and yet, should couldn’t put a name on them. Was that love though?

    Carmen could see the far away look in Shane’s hazel-green eyes. She leaned forward and lightly brushed her full lips against Shane’s forehead to bring her out of her reverie. “Hey, are you ok?”

    Shane stared at her for a few seconds longer and let her lips curl into an appreciative smile, ‘live for the moment’.

    Any thoughts of even remotely paying attention to the movie had been tossed out the window at this point. She pulled Carmen closer to her and kissed her delicately, slowly, tenderly, savoring the beautiful full lips that belonged to the woman who was moaning into the kiss. She nibbled on her lower lip and slid her tongue over the bite a second later, causing Carmen to grind her hips, which in turn lead to satisfying yet frustrating friction between the two.

    Carmen had enough of this, she gracefully yet forcefully, slid her tongue into Shane’s mouth, searching and probing in the most delicious ways possible. She drew her hand down to Shane’s chest and grabbed a fistful of her jacket, tilting her head and pulling her deeper into the kiss.

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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