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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    Chapter 2

    January in Los Angeles meant one thing really; Lots of rain and the worst part was that sometimes it just came without warning. Driving to Carmen’s house (or rather, Carmen’s mom’s house), Shane was desperately trying to see through the thick sheet of rain that just wouldn’t dissipate. She loved the rain, the cleansing little droplets that fell from the heavens seemingly only from God’s good graces. Shane was by no means religious, just spiritual and to her, the only thing better then the rain was the thunder and lightening that went with it; “it’s heavens fury” she was told by a foster parent in her younger years. She believed the explanation to this day, even though she knew her otherwise. She just didn’t understand why heaven had to be so pissed right now on her semi-date with the woman who could undue her and hold her together with one sultry stare. ‘Ugh I’m turning into such a lez’.

    Driving down Beverly Dr., Shane was stuck at an intersection where the street light was being fixed. The cop was wearing a plastic sheet and directing traffic while being pelted by the rain’s watery bullets. She felt bad for the officer, ‘***** job, the guy signed up to serve and protect not serve and direct’. Shane’s cell phone began to ring and she fished through her pockets to get it out. “Hello?”

    “Yoda, what’s crackin’?”

    “Hey Al” she said in a flat tone while rolling her eyes. As much as she loved Alice, she could tell by the sound of her voice that she was on a fact finding mission.

    “Could you sound any less enthusiastic, jeez”

    “I’m sorry,” Shane started, then she cleared her throat and continued “Like oh my God, Hey Alley like I’ve been waiting a million years for you to holler back at me girlfriend!”

    Alice laughed heartily, “Ewww, you sound like Dana. OW!” a faint voice that sounded like “she does not sound like me… jerk” could be heard and Shane realized she was on speaker.

    “Hey Dane and ps. if either of you tell anyone I did that, I’ll have to kill you. Anyways what’s the phone call for?”

    “Can’t a friend phone a friend with out the friend suspecting the friend?”

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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