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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 3
Shane quickly ducked her head and pressed her lips against Carmen’s, tearing a moan from her. She needed to stop thinking so she lost herself to the sensations; the feeling of Carmen’s full lower lip in between her own, her hips bucking against her steadily thrusting fingers, the hands tangled in her hair, the full ***** pressed against her chest. ‘It all feels so good and so right and so undeserved but I want her, I need her like I need air… I need air’. She broke the kiss, panting, and was again eye to eye with this enchanting Goddess, and then the iron cage around her heart cracked, ‘I love her’.
Shane curled her fingers, looking for that spot that would send Carmen over the edge. ‘Stop thinking, deal with it later’. The sharp intake of breath and the “***** me” she moaned indicated she had found the area. She re-doubled her efforts, making sure she hit the spot with each thrust.
Carmen muttered in a very strained voice, every single swear word in the Spanish dictionary. And just when the brown beauty thought it couldn’t get any better…
“You look so beautiful”. The voice, the words, the overwhelming joy and relief and fear and love had all swelled up at once in a fist and knocked her into a sea of ecstasy. The tremors climbed up her spine and spread through-out her limbs as one of the most powerful orgasms she had ever experienced rip through her body, causing her to moan and hold Shane as closely as she could to her body.
“Oh God, Shane”, her muscles felt stretched to their limits and were twitching randomly. Her chest was heaving as she tried to catch her breath.
Shane lifted her hand and swept the sweat dampened hair from Carmen’s forehead, carefully avoiding her eyes. She drew her hand out of the moist dampness of Carmen’s ***** and wrapped her arms around her waist, fully supporting her weight.
Carmen could feel herself being carried but her eyes and her head were to heavy to be lifted off of Shane’s shoulder. The last ripples of orgasmic bliss were still coursing through her as she felt her self being gently placed on the bed and felt sheets being pulled over her. She rolled over onto her side, ‘Oh god. She’s going to leave me here, alone, with psycho Mark, all because of that stupid NO SLEEPOVERS rule and she’s going to go out somewhere so she can pick up some sleazy, *****, slu…’ but she stopped her train of thought as she felt the sheets lift up and the mattress sink down behind her.
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Great update as always! I love it when Carmen is pinning over Shane , not knowing what Shan feels. I love the angst between them. I love the drama. I loved this chapter so much, hoefully you will cont. to spice things up with some drama.:)
Yes finally Shane!!! Awesome chapter, and the “Alice”-interuption was hilarious! Great writing!
Great update! Loved it! And, like 2BMe, I thought Shane was going to blow it too. Nice job. :D Very hot, very sweet when Shane got into bed with Carmen and cuddled, and the phone conversation was funny. I’m glad Carmen finally brought up the issue of where they were going with this, and that Shane finally told her she loved her too. I can’t wait to read more of this! Really, I check for updates every day. Am I hooked? Yeah, I’d say so. :p
Damn! I thought she was going to blow it. Great build up to Shane admitting her feelings. Shane & Carmens inner mental battle nearly drove me to drink:D Great update.
OMG!!!! yes!!!! let shane allow herself to feel what she wants and rightfully deserves. i wish she would quit beatin herself up and allow carmen’s love to wash over and let her start anew. please post soon. PEACE.
oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!
oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!
ah, yes! excellent update! shane is finally diving in head first. loved the inner struggle inside shane’s head.
Wonderful as always. Love that Carmen is sincere about her affection for Shane. Shane need to trust herself. Cant wait for whats gonna happen with Shane and Carmen. Thanks