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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 3

    Story written on November 10, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Last Chance for Romance

    She couldn’t fight back the smile that crept across her lips. Nor could she stop herself from shivering slightly as she felt the body heat radiating from Shane. ‘Might as well go all the way’ and so she reached back behind her and searched for a hand, grabbed it, and draped it over her stomach, resting it on top of her own hand. She was cuddling with Shane. Shane was Cuddling with Her. THEY were CUDDLING TOGETHER!

    Tears threatened to come but Carmen blinked them into submission and enjoyed bathing in the afterglow. She was exhausted and it was already taking hold as her eyes began to droop down. Just before she fell asleep, she felt Shane kiss the back of her head and heard something that sounded a lot like love…

    “I love this” Shane whispered to herself. And she really did, she enjoyed the feeling having someone who she cared about so much in the same bed as her. No expectations and no awkwardness, just peace and tranquility.

    Well, at least there would be peace if her mind wasn’t racing a mile a minute. ‘Carmen, Love, Commitment, Fidelity, Feelings, Letting it All Go and Letting it All Out. *****, I’m not ready for this.’

    ‘If not now, then when?’ she was arguing with herself again. It was how she figured things out once the time came to address the issue, otherwise, she would just not think about it until the situation became dire. This was full red alert for Shane.

    ‘Eventually’

    ‘Procrastinating won’t make these feelings go away man’

    ‘I know they won’t’

    ‘Then suck it up princess and do what you got to do’

    “Yeah, I will damn it” she mumbled. The last thing on her mind as she fell asleep was of her waiting at the police station for hours…

    They woke up to the sound of Shane’s cellphone ringing the Ghostbusters’ theme. The lanky hairdresser drew her off of Carmen, much to both their displeasure, and checked her call display.

    She hung her head and flipped the phone open “What Al?”

    “Wow, snappy much? Are you P.M.S’ing because you’ve been bitchy like a fat man denied at an all-you-can-eat-restaurant all day”

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    1. Great update as always! I love it when Carmen is pinning over Shane , not knowing what Shan feels. I love the angst between them. I love the drama. I loved this chapter so much, hoefully you will cont. to spice things up with some drama.:)

    3. Great update! Loved it! And, like 2BMe, I thought Shane was going to blow it too. Nice job. :D Very hot, very sweet when Shane got into bed with Carmen and cuddled, and the phone conversation was funny. I’m glad Carmen finally brought up the issue of where they were going with this, and that Shane finally told her she loved her too. I can’t wait to read more of this! Really, I check for updates every day. Am I hooked? Yeah, I’d say so. :p

    4. Damn! I thought she was going to blow it. Great build up to Shane admitting her feelings. Shane & Carmens inner mental battle nearly drove me to drink:D Great update.

    5. OMG!!!! yes!!!! let shane allow herself to feel what she wants and rightfully deserves. i wish she would quit beatin herself up and allow carmen’s love to wash over and let her start anew. please post soon. PEACE.

    6. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    7. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    9. Wonderful as always. Love that Carmen is sincere about her affection for Shane. Shane need to trust herself. Cant wait for whats gonna happen with Shane and Carmen. Thanks

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