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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6
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That fear and panic from earlier that day came crashing down on Shane’s sanity like a ton of bricks. It was Clive. In the flesh. And not looking so healthy himself.
His eyes were drawn and had heavy bags under them that were in sharp contrast to his uncharacteristically pail skin. His arms looked thin and he stood in a slight slouch, as if he had the weight of the world on his back.
“How the ***** did you find my address?” Shane inquired coolly as she stepped forward, forcing Clive to move down the steps as she quietly shut the door behind her.
“You’ve fucked at least four quarters of the dykes in Los Angeles and so I thought at least one of them was bound to have your address. I just asked for it.”
She shoved her hands in her pockets as she looked at Clive in hatred. “Great, so you’re here, now what?”
“I came to ask you to reconsider my offer.” It didn’t sound so much like a question then like a demand.
After all she had done for him, after all the ***** they had gone through together, the talk of getting out of the ***** they once lived in and making lives for themselves, after all that; here he was trying to drag her back down into that vicious cycle of tricking, snorting, and fiending.
She was never going to go near that life again, she didn’t give a ***** who he told… but she hadn’t told Carmen. ‘*****! Wait, she’s still in the house I just need to get him out of here and deal with it somewhere else before she comes out looking for me.’
Shane shifted from foot to foot, looking around nervously in all directions. “Listen, can we talk about this somewhere else?”
“Why?”
“Because I don’t think it’s ***** cool to talk about something like this out in the street.”
“So let’s go into your house then.” He offered as he started making his way towards the front door.
Shane reached out her hand and grabbed Clive’s arm, stopping him in his tracks. “We can’t go in there.”
“And why the ***** not?”
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Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya
WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.
ooo boy…soo much drama drama and intensity, i love it! i’ll be waiting for an update :)
I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya
dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^
great job! i love your story BB!
great update post now
oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!
This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.