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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6
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“Because I’ve got some chick in there.”
“Yeah, and? Just kick her the ***** out.”
She was quickly becoming frustrated with the whole situation and just wanted it to end already. “I can’t!”
Giving her an incredulous look, he sighed over-dramatically. “Jesus Christ Shane why?”
“Because it’s not ***** nice now can we go somewhere else?”
“*****, I’ll kick the *****’s ***** out, holy *****!” Clive said in exasperation as he twisted his arm away from Shane.
Moving like a cat, she situated herself between the front door and Clive, blocking his way into her home and her life. “No way man.”
Clive stared at her in confusion for a moment until a look of understanding dawned on his face, and that’s what almost made Shane’s heart freeze in her chest.
Clive starting backing up and smirked at Shane “That isn’t just some chick in there. That’s someone special.” he said with a taunting tone to his voice.
Shane couldn’t speak, she just stared at him in hatred and fear. The rancid emotions she held for Clive were bubbling towards the surface and she didn’t know if she could stop herself from lunging at him for much longer.
He slid his hands into his pockets and went on. “What does she look like Shane? She hot? She ugly? Does she ***** you like a pro because I know that you’re a hard act to keep up with. You cheat on her Shane? ***** other girls behind her back? Old habits are hard to break huh?”
She’d had enough, she knew he was tempting her into a fight and at that point she was more than happy to oblige him. Balling up her fists in fury, she started taking several decisive steps towards her enemy but soon stopped dead in her tracks after Clive pulled out a black object from his pocket.
“Nuh uh *****. Play nice or I’ll have to slice you open and your little ***** too.” Clive said as he waved it back and forth in the air.
Shane knew what it was, it was a switchblade. A necessity when living on the streets. She had one herself but unfortunately it was safely tucked away in her jacket pocket.
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Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya
WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.
ooo boy…soo much drama drama and intensity, i love it! i’ll be waiting for an update :)
I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya
dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^
great job! i love your story BB!
great update post now
oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!
This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.