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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6

    Story written on December 3, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    This can’t be life


    The air around them was crackling with the electricity of intensity. It was as if he held the aces and Shane didn’t even have a pair of twos. She tried to figure out a strategy quickly. ‘I could rush him, I’ve always been faster than him, maybe if I…’ just then, the front door opened behind her.


    It was Carmen wearing one of Shane’s button up shirts and her pants from that night. “Shane baby, what’s goin on?”


    “Carmen go back inside now.” Shane yelled back at her, never taking her eyes off of Clive.


    Clive eyed the girl at the door and put on his most charming smile that made Shane’s stomach churn in disgust. “No wait. I’m Clive, and you must be Shane’s new girl. Nice to meet you.”


    Carmen knew there was something horribly wrong and was fighting between Shane’s orders to go back inside or to stay out there and find out what the ***** was going on. Instead she opted for the second choice and stayed where she was at the door but made no move to go towards Shane.


    “Well I’ll cut the pleasantries and get to the good stuff. Did you know your girlfriend used to give random men hand jobs so she could feed her cocaine and heroine addiction while she lived in the streets? And did you know that she nearly OD’d twice? And did you also know that she was nearly beaten to death because she couldn’t pay off her debts to her dealer? But I’m sure Shane must’ve told you all about that *****. Right Shane?”


    He didn’t noticed Shane running at him till she was basically on top of him as they both crashed to the ground.


    Carmen reached out as if to stop Shane but knew she was to far away. “SHANE!” she screamed in terror.


    The lights in the Porter/Kennard house-hold went on as Bette stepped outside to see what the ruckus was. She found Shane wrestling with some guy on the lawn. Her first reaction was to go over there and do something but then she saw the man stick his right hand out and push a button, sending a silver blade flying to the top of a black handle. She ran in the back of the house to grab the phone and call the cops, all the while screaming for Tina to wake up.

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    1. Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya

    2. WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.

    4. I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya

    5. dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^

    8. oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!

    9. This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.

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