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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6

    Story written on December 3, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    This can’t be life


    Shane was still on top of him, keeping the knife at bay as she held his wrist down with her left hand and tried to choke him with her right. His face was turning red from the lack of oxygen and she felt she was winning the battle till she was knocked off of him from a blow to the right side of her face.


    Splayed on the ground, white spots blurring her vision, Shane tried to sit up and get her equilibrium back. She faintly heard him coughing and gasping for breath as she shook her head and finally sat upright.


    Carmen was paralyzed with shock. Her mind screamed for her to move, to do something, do anything! But she couldn’t budge. Her feet were blocks keeping her in place and out of harms way. She watched in horror as Shane sat up and rubbed her eyes, oblivious to Clive lunging at her with his knife over his head. She didn’t even realize as she let out a blood chilling scream that resembled Shane’s name.


    That soul crushing sound brought Shane out of her stupor and gave her just enough time to react to the deadly steel making its way down towards her. She got her hand up just in time to deflect the strike downwards and to the right, but she wasn’t quick enough to stop the blade from cutting across the side of her neck and drawing some blood.


    Clive brought up his hand again and this time she was ready. She grabbed his wrist in mid-air and held it there above her but the force drove her onto her back. As he tried to bring the knife down on her again, their other hands wrestled and scratched at each other for any type of vantage point.


    Carmen had broken out of her trance and was running shakily down the steps to tackle at Clive when a jet black Ford Explorer screech to a halt in front of the house, and Casey Young jumped out of the drivers seat.


    A muscled hand grabbed the back of Clive’s shirt and threw him off of Shane, sending him flying several feet backwards and landing with a thud on his face.

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    1. Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya

    2. WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.

    4. I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya

    5. dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^

    8. oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!

    9. This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.

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