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Hearing Alice mention the infamous Pacer which had been the focus of
many horror stories from her high school years, Dana chuckled and
remarked, “Smoke signaling car, right Al?”
“I hated that car,” said Alice, sounding disgusted. Now lost in her
memories and appearing like she wished she could put the vehicle in
front of her and shoot it. She toppled into Dana, leaning into and
looking up at her. “It sucked,” she stated again with drunken
importance.
“That is what I’m gathering,” murmured Helena, voice laced with light
devotion as she looked deep into Alice’s eyes when the journalist
focused on her. “You will have to tell me stories of this metal
monstrosity soon. I must admit that I now find myself terribly curious.”
“I once had to push it up a ginormous hill,” said Alice somberly,
leaning towards Helena and held up by Dana’s hands on her waist.
“Ginormous!” she emphasized the word by flinging her hands out much
like a fisherman bragging about his catch. Helena released an immediate
burst of warm laughter at this and Alice grinned goofily at the British
woman. Leaning forward enough that she was practically toppling into
Helena even with an irritated Dana holding her tight, Alice said in a
faux confession, “It almost ran me over. I was nearly squashed like a
roach.”
“Is that so?” Helena drew the words out in affectionate amusement,
lifting an eyebrow and smiling in encouragement. “What happened next?
Did the accursed vehicle find some sort of mechanical Raid with which
to dispose your lovely person?”
“Mechanical Raid,” Alice echoed Helena’s words with a giggle. She
leaned into Dana, pressing her head under the athlete’s chin and
burrowing into her for support while continuing to look at Helena with
an adoring gaze. Unaware that both of these gestures were sparking the
flame of jealousy in each woman. “You’re funny… you always make me
feel better.”
“Thank
you,” said Helena in sincere response, looking as if she wanted to stop
herself from making a loving gesture before deciding that there was no
reason to stop herself. That’s why she stepped forward and flicked her
eyes up briefly to lock with Dana’s before moving forward to lightly
press her lips to Alice’s. When she pulled away, the blonde had her
eyes shut tight and a dreamy smile on her features. Releasing a soft
but strangled laugh on seeing this and tracing the line of her cheek
lightly, Helena murmured, “I do love you so, my darling.”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!