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Opening
her eyes and continuing to wear a dreamy look on her face, Alice was
about to respond when Dana stated in an abrupt and harsh announcement,
“We’re going.” And that said, she smoothly swept her arms under Alice’s
legs and held the blonde easily in her embrace while walking down the
sidewalk. Dana was cradling the writer in a tender hold while Helena
remained frozen to the spot, stunned by the sudden turn of
events.
Frozen
until she caught sight of Alice hanging over one of Dana’s strong
shoulders, waving madly at her to come with them as she called out in
loud sing song tones, “Helennnnna! We’re going! Going… going… we’re
almost gone!”
Cursing under her breath and wondering why she decided to wear sandals,
Helena did a fast sprint after them. Wishing that she had tried to keep
up with her training regime from her time running at University as she
did so.
—
It took one stop light and three checks in the rear view mirror for
Dana to realize that she had once again been outmaneuvered by Helena
Peabody. Because her insistence they take her car for the drive to
Alice’s apartment put Dana squarely in the driver’s seat of the Subaru
Outback and Helena in the backseat with Alice.
Dana really hated Helena. Really, really, really, hated Helena. She
hated how with every passing second she seemed to be that much closer
to Alice, she hated how she made the blonde sigh in quiet pleasure from
her touch, she hated how her smoky blue eyes met hers through the rear
view mirror and held a veiled look that made Dana nervous though she
couldn’t seem to interpret what it meant. She just plain hated Helena.
But Alice loved her.
Alice truly loved Helena and knowing that killed Dana because she also
knew that was her doing. She knew that if she hadn’t ended it with
Alice, if she hadn’t broken her heart as she did then Helena wouldn’t
be sitting in the back seat of her car, arm around Alice’s shoulders,
holding her close and murmuring soft words of affection into her messy
blonde hair.
She was the reason that Alice loved Helena, she had allowed that to
happen because of her own indecision and doubts. What stung the most
was the fact that Dana knew she couldn’t have done things differently,
not really.
Five.
That was the amount of people Dana had been with in her life
romantically. Just five and she was twenty nine years old. She had
always known Alice was the one for her, at least as soon as their
romance began, but at the same time she longed for that period of
dating she missed…
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!