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Tumbling Down
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“I’ve got it from here,” said Dana when they exited The Palms and stood
on the sidewalk. She kept a steady arm wrapped around Alice’s waist,
easily holding the blonde up who had her head tilted back as she stared
up at the night sky. “I’ll take care of her, don’t worry about it. You
probably have tons of fancy meetings tomorrow anyway.”
“A meeting, whether it be fancy as you say or not, could never be more
important than Alice,” responded Helena in warning tones, giving Dana a
piercing look that said she wasn’t about to be dismissed. “Any plans I
make can and will always be changed so I might spend time with her,
whatever the capacity she will choose.”
Releasing a noise of frustration upon realizing that Helena wouldn’t be
cooperating with her idea of how this night should be headed, Dana
muttered, “Fine.” She shifted her hold on Alice slightly and looked
down the street. “We’ll take my car.”
Following Dana’s gaze to her Subaru Outback and lifting an eyebrow,
Helena remarked, “I believe I’m parked closer.” When Dana turned her
way, the British woman formed a charming smile and nodded towards her
platinum colored Jaguar XKR Coupe that sat not even a foot away from
where they were standing. “Shall we?”
Helena extended her hand to Alice in warm invitation who immediately
responded, starting to step from Dana and towards the heiress. Only to
be stopped by the athlete hooking a firm arm around her waist to keep
her in place. The blonde stumbled forward slightly and Helena jogged
forward in concern while Dana frowned and pulled Alice to her in a
gentle but sure motion, kissing the nape of her neck and staring at
Helena with lidded and accusatory blue eyes.
“She’s coming with me,” stated Dana in tones that implied she wouldn’t
deal well with any arguments being broached. “We’re taking my car, it’s
safer.”
“And my vehicle isn’t?” asked Helena dryly. She stepped up to Alice and
delicately pushed aside the lock of blonde hair that had fallen in her
eyes from the forward and back motion she just experienced. “I assure
you that British vehicles can hold up to the same safety standards as
the Japanese. Although,” her voice held a humorous lilt. “I have doubts
on American.”
“I had a ’78 AMC Pacer,” Alice offered, smiling happily at Helena and
leaning into her touch. She squinted at the other woman in an attempt
to see her more clearly. “It sucked.”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!