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“Not hurt?” suggested Alice, wearing a silly smile that made Helena chuckle fondly.
“We
should go,” Dana stated in firm and almost angry tones. She hated the
fact that Helena always seemed to be one step ahead in this strange
competition for Alice and her love. No matter what the athlete did she
somehow found it bested by Helena and her words or actions. Although
right now she was definitely dressed better. Feeling a little
triumphant on finding something that put her on better ground, Dana
wound an arm around Alice to hold the blonde steady then looked around
her to ask Helena rather mockingly, “What are you wearing?”
Looking down at her ensemble that consisted of black Mephisto Crucita
sandals, worn hip hugger jeans, and a pale pink t-shirt that featured
both a picture of the band Flock of Seagulls as well as their name in
hot pink on it, Helena looked at Dana and replied staidly, “Clothing.”
“I can see that,” said Dana, snickering and beginning the slow walk to
the door. “But what is with the shirt? I didn’t think you were the type
to be big with the 80′s nostalgia.” She lifted an eyebrow and drawled,
“I mean… Flock of Seagulls? Come on.”
“I ran so far away,” Alice sang half heartedly, nuzzling her face into
the crook of Dana’s neck and making the tennis player shiver at the
feel of her warm breath against her skin. After doing this, she moved
her head slightly and squinted at Helena who was opening the front door
to The Palms for them. “Hey!” she declared in bleary outrage, pointing
at the British woman. “You lied to me! You totally stole my t-shirt.”
Chuckling again, Helena stepped back to push the door further open and
allowed Dana to easily pass while holding up Alice. “I never said I
didn’t have your shirt, my darling,” she murmured in playful tones. “I
merely said I had no idea where it could be and that wasn’t a lie
because at the time I truly did have no idea.”
“Right,” Alice snorted, waving her hands about in a grand gesture of
skepticism. “You keep sayin’ that. I want my t-shirt back. It’s pink!”
With those words said, they exited The Palms and the door swung shut to
close with a quiet click and a slight thump. Staring at the now closed
door, Tabitha shook her head and muttered wryly, “Goodnight and good
luck.”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!