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Dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, she held a cup of homemade ice cream in
one hand and a spoon containing the ice cream in another. Alice was
busy darting around the woman with her, laughing and prodding at her in
an insistence to try the frozen treat. Finally the woman, whose back
was to Dana, gave up in the strange dance they were conducting to open
her mouth and lean forward, taking the ice cream in.
Dana watched as Alice stared at the woman and that was the only thing
she could do as the writer let her companion set the cup aside. She
watched in dim shock as she finally saw for the first time the woman
with Alice was Helena Peabody, whose eyes were lidded and face lined in
deep affection as she captured the blonde’s lips for a tender kiss that
they both smiled into.
Though she knocked over a cart of tomatoes during her hasty retreat,
Dana had somehow managed to escape unnoticed by both women but the
damage had still been done. She saw it right then. Saw that Alice had
moved on, that she had found someone who made her happy, she had found
someone to love and what had Dana found? What?
Her freedom? Her independence? Her youth?
None of that… the only thing she had found was the newly captured
realization that she had lost the only thing that really mattered in
her life and for what? Nothing at all.
The next day she broke up with Lara and she then proceeded to spend
several weeks wallowing in her own state of misery while trying to
figure out what she could do to get Alice back. Until she finally gave
up on figuring things out because that simply wasn’t who she was and
appeared at the door to Alice’s apartment one late night or early
morning.
Appeared to kiss Alice the same way Dana had been kissed that very
first time at four a.m., trying to show Alice with it how much she
missed her, how much she loved her, how much she regretted all that she
had done, all the painful things that had happened between them.
But she literally found the door closed to her.
This time wasn’t like the others though. She wouldn’t let herself be
pushed away and denied. Dana persisted until she got Alice to admit
what she felt both of them already knew. That they belonged together,
that they still loved each other despite all the pain their love had
caused.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!