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Tumbling Down
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“Real
funny, Al,” drawled Dana, who kept the blonde safely in her arms,
facing Helena as she shut the door. “I’m going to take out her
contacts,” Dana stated before turning on her heel and carrying Alice
towards her bedroom.
“You are, are you?” murmured Helena humorously, trailing after Dana and
sighing irritably under her breath. “Why do I have a nagging suspicion
that might not be the easiest of tasks with our paramour in the
inebriated position in which she currently finds herself?”
“She
hates sleeping in her contacts,” said Dana, who was already in the
bathroom. In a sign of both her athletic prowess and her rather
flexible abilities, the tennis player lifted her right leg to kick the
seat down on the toilet then carefully sat Alice down. Looking into
Alice’s brown eyes and smiling softly, Dana cupped the journalist’s
cheek. “Don’t you? They dry your eyes out and make you feel like some
sort of weird zombie. Cornwallace zombies or something, right?”
“Cornea zombies,” offered Alice, tilting her head and squinting at Dana
who had just become bleary for a moment. “They steal the wet eyeballs
of living when theirs dry out from leaving in their contacts for too
long. Plus they’re dead.”
“I am well aware of how much she dislikes sleeping with her contacts
in. I merely think that getting her to remove them will not prove the
easiest thing to accomplish as of this moment,” said Helena, watching
skeptically from where she leaned in the doorway as Dana readied the
various supplies for the upcoming contacts removal. Though she knew she
should probably be stopping this attempt because it had little to no
chance of success she couldn’t seem to make herself. Probably because
she knew no harm would come to Alice and was perversely curious to see
the results. Raising an eyebrow as Dana crouched in front of Alice and
slowly reached towards her left eye to remove the first contact, Helena
remarked, “This isn’t a wise idea.”
Sure enough, the second before Dana’s fingers made contact with Alice’s
skin to push it together and remove the contact, the blonde jerked her
head away with a horrified squeal, twisting away from the athlete on
the toilet seat. Blinking in surprise at this, Dana frowned a bit then
said, “Quit messing around, Al.” She placed her hands firm but gentle
on the blonde’s hips and turned her on the toilet seat so she was again
facing Dana. “I know you hate sleeping in your contacts so let me take
them out, okay?”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!