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Certainly she didn’t expect Alice to dump Helena for her. Well, she had
wished that would happen but Dana didn’t expect it. No, not at all. But
she also didn’t expect to end up sharing Alice with the British woman
for a period of time that appeared to be nearly endless.
That’s why she demanded the journalist make a choice just because Dana
wasn’t sure how much more she could take. It killed her to fall a
little more in love with Alice for every second she spent with her when
she didn’t know if the love would last, if she would be the one that
the blonde chose. And once again, Dana hated herself for causing Alice
pain because she could see the decision was tearing her apart. The
drinking binge at The Palms tonight was proof enough of that but while
she hated herself for it, Dana wouldn’t change her actions.
Just because she had to know. They all had to know. Her, Alice, and
even Helena who she hated because while Dana did hate the heiress she
could still acknowledge Helena loved Alice. Much like she could
acknowledge Alice loved Helena, though that fact nearly killed her.
Heaving a sigh and flicking her eyes up to look in the rear view
mirror, Dana did this right in time to see Alice reaching her lips up
to Helena’s for a kiss. Eyes narrowing decisively and a sharp flare of
jealousy seizing her heart, Dana checked the road and made a sudden
sharp lane change, causing the near kiss to be effectively derailed.
Meeting Helena’s eyes in the rear view mirror which were studying her
with a shrewd and angry gaze and smiling slowly, Dana said in overly
apologetic tones, “Sorry.”
“Quite alright,” Helena drawled in a sardonic reply, her hand tangling
in Alice’s messy blonde hair and caressing her gently as she held
Dana’s gaze in the mirror before pressing a kiss on the top of the
writer’s head. “No harm done.”
The only reply Dana had was to smile tightly in return.
—
“Honey’s,” Alice said the word enthusiastically. She was once again
resting comfortably in Dana’s embrace as the tennis player had taken
advantage of Helena’s distraction in removing her seatbelt to sweep the
blonde up into her arms. Though her holding Alice had granted Helena
the task of searching through the pockets of the journalist’s jeans to
find the keys to her apartment. She wasn’t sure which of them had
gained the advantage. But right now, with Alice’s breath warm on her
skin, making her shiver at the feel of her laughter as the writer spoke
into the crook of Dana’s neck, she thought perhaps she did. “I’m home!”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!