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Tumbling Down
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“This isn’t wise,” Helena echoed in tones that predicted certain ominous yet entertaining doom.
“Shut up,” said Dana, scowling and looking at Helena as she said the
words. Focusing back on Alice, she smiled reassuringly. “I’m going to
take out your left contact, all right?”
“All right,” replied Alice hesitantly, her hands laced together and
perched in her lap, making her look something like a chastised school
girl.
Moving more slowly the second time around, Dana reached for Alice’s
skin to push it together and remove the contact. Just like before,
Alice released a horrified squeal as she twisted away from Dana but at
a far faster pace, causing her to twist right off the toilet seat and
onto the floor of her bathroom with a loud thump.
“Al!” exclaimed Dana in shock, reaching for the writer but finding
herself soon blocked as Helena pushed off the doorway and fell to her
knees in front of the journalist.
“You haven’t injured yourself, have you?” asked Helena worriedly,
reaching for Alice and inspecting the other woman with her eyes.
Absently rubbing her bottom and wearing a deep pout, Alice looked at Helena with a grave stare and said, “My ***** hurts.”
“I would imagine,” Helena chuckled, reaching for Alice’s hands and
helping the blonde to her feet. Peering at Dana over the top of Alice’s
head, she questioned, “Do you wish to have a final go at removing your
contacts?”
“No,”
said Alice irritably. She remained standing, tipping slightly from side
to side, squinting at nothing and saying to no one in particular, “I’m
thirsty.”
“I’ll get you water!” Dana offered eagerly, wanting to make up for her
miscalculation with removing the contacts. She was out the door of the
bathroom and headed towards the kitchen before either Alice or Helena
could respond.
Sighing heavily, Helena wound an arm around Alice’s waist to support
her weight as she led them to the living room. “I wonder if I might ask
you something,” she said in a quiet utterance.
“Ask me what?” squinted Alice, leaning into Helena and resting her head
on the other woman’s shoulder while they made their way into the room.
“Were you drinking due to our situation?” Helena asked, purposefully
avoiding Alice’s eyes while she gently helped the writer sit on her
couch. She crouched in front of her with her hands holding Alice’s and
her face looking in the direction of the kitchen, where Dana currently
was. “Because you cannot choose between she and I?” When she felt the
heat of Alice’s stare on her features instead of a verbal reply, Helena
swallowed nervously and said in a bare whisper, “You needn’t fret over
it… despite our adversarial relationship I would wager she and I want
the same things for you.” Turning slowly to look at Alice, she offered
a small and wry smile. “To see you happy and this night,” Helena
chuckled and reached up to cup Alice’s face in her hands. “Is surely
not a sign of happiness, my darling.”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!