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A long and seemingly never ending silence passed over them and then
Alice covered Helena’s hands with her own, clumsily pressing the palm
of one to her mouth, kissing it tenderly. “I’m happy,” she mumbled into
Helena’s skin. Brown eyes, wide and lost, met smoky blue and Alice
dropped the hand to reach out, trembling and uncertain, as she wound
her fingers around the back of Helena’s neck to pull the British woman
towards her. Capturing her lips in a soft kiss and saying in a broken
confession, “I’m happy you saved me.”
Hearing these words was enough to make Helena want to cry. The idea
that she saved Alice seemed so very wrong to her simply because the
heiress felt that it truly went the other way round. That Alice had
saved her from living an existence where she simply allowed people to
see what they wanted and nothing else.
She was a Peabody.
Peabody’s were rich and Peabody’s were charming and Peabody’s were
intelligent and Peabody’s were devious and Peabody’s were meant to do
as the family intended. They were never allowed to deviate from the
plans made for them because the moment they were conceived their future
was already mapped out. In a strange way, even Helena herself was
planned at a strategic level.
How she would talk, how she would walk, how she interact with others,
all of this was decided before she even took her first breath in the
world. And to Helena, it seemed how she did each of these things was
never quite good enough for her mother. In fact, it was never quite
good enough for most in her family.
Strange as many might find it, she was the black sheep in the family
because she didn’t really share their maddening love of the arts.
Helena found herself far more intrigued by politics and social service
than the history of the Impressionist movement which left her in the
ranks of the common people philistines of the world that her family
held in great disdain.
To this day, Helena didn’t understand why art was so much more
important than feeding a hungry child and she was rather thankful that
she never would understand. Just as she was thankful that she had met
Alice, despite the circumstances.
It pained her to think about the time, though later it led to the
happiest days in her life so far, because of how very badly Alice had
been damaged. She was a soul lost and drowning in her own misery, *****
bent on dragging the cause of her suffering down with her, not to
mention anyone else who wound up in her way.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!